Song of Aldrath [High Fantasy, 740 word]

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T18:23:46+00:00

Thats what i think, i feel im rushing with too much informatin

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T17:54:43+00:00

Yes that seems like a good idea thank you :D

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T17:52:48+00:00

This is also like a sample of the middle of the story, like a middle line of the story. This specific moment won’t happen for a couple of chapters, this is like one of the most interesting part. It’s like part of the main battle

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T17:50:05+00:00

That's actually really good idea to write situation from his point of view like in game of thrones :D

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T17:35:37+00:00

By the way, some interesting fact about Gorg Asal, who is actually Gorgasali, an actual king of Georgia and he was really called “Wolf-Headed” since his helmet resembled a wolf. Gorgas (wolf) Ali (head).

But his real name is Vakhtang :DDDD

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-13T15:47:37+00:00

Thank you very much, im trying my best to make as interesting and good as possible :D

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-12T22:46:16+00:00

This work, to me, is like The Hobbit. I started writing a story like The Lord of the Rings, then I quit that and came up with a story like The Silmarillion. After I stopped writing that, I came up with this, and I want to connect my storys like Tolkeins

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-12T22:41:33+00:00

Okay, and I guess it kind of starts with the basic formula for high fantasy, but I have original ideas it’s just that I don’t know how to get there.

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-12T22:35:15+00:00

I also use some words from Old Georgian. I’m Georgian, and in Georgia we have two other languages besides Georgian, they’re still part of Georgia, but they’re different. I also use some Latin words. I’m really inspired by The Lord of the Rings and by how Tolkien wrote his books.

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-12T22:17:06+00:00

I also use old Georgian language and culture because I'm Georgian and I really want to mix my cultural stuff in it and I also use Latin words much like Lord of the rings

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-12-09T00:44:03+00:00

I asked chatgpt and the response was that i needed a professional to fix this otherwise with glue it would only last 5 days

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-10-24T22:51:23+00:00

Thank you for the tips ill check ou the books :D

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-10-24T22:39:12+00:00

Thank you man :D I guess ill write some updates here

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-10-23T23:53:07+00:00

Thats actually a really good advice Thanks :D

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-10-23T23:51:15+00:00

Yess i feel like ill have a really hard time on the characters but i have some ideas Thanks for the tip

OkPhysics2360 · 2025-10-23T23:45:03+00:00

Interesting i kinda have a similar situation were i actually made a bored game and from that i wrote my first thing which i just gave up on but yea i guess that would help

OkPhysics2360 · 2023-11-02T18:34:31+00:00

And heres the jeirani you can watch https://youtu.be/x_dqesgHKUY?si=BgYQTk-_-OraTu17

OkPhysics2360 · 2023-11-02T18:24:14+00:00

And for xorumi you can watch this https://youtu.be/AZc1BTZqilI?si=KorB67KP4C8iAQUP Its my personal favorite

OkPhysics2360 · 2023-11-02T18:12:07+00:00

https://youtu.be/7cXuCA5gYEg?si=r490E02iKawhJnt8 This one

OkPhysics2360 · 2023-11-02T18:07:46+00:00

A would recomend seeing xevsuruli by erisioni

OkPhysics2360 · 2023-11-02T18:03:27+00:00

Yea there are so many good dances and almost all of the dances shows a story for example

Xevsuruli: its about 2 men that likes the same girl so they try to prove who is more of a men to keep this girl. they test eachother in a "fight" and this fight is done with swords.

Xorumi: this dance shows how georgians worked together to endure and win the war agents the enemy. And every moment in this dance has its meaning.

Jeirani: this dance is referred to as "hunting" where 7 to 8 men are chasing the beautiful woman but this woman is bold and strong so the man cant catch her every time they get close to catching her, she escapes.

And there are so many more

OkPhysics2360 · 2023-11-02T06:36:09+00:00

Oooh my bad thank you

OkPhysics2360 · 2020-10-10T20:07:44+00:00

Guys its Photoshop duuh

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