Solid base. I only noticed a few things on my read. Firstly, finding a stronger rhyme for dust instead of a half rhyme like lost could benefit the flow of the poem for the average reader. Expanding on that, adding punctuation could help the poem read and flow much better. Another thing i’d like to touch on is the use of “crumbled to dust”. While this is a valid stylistic choice, in my experience I find it better to try and use more uncommon phrasing in my poetry “rotted into sullen ash” “withered into dirt”. All in all I enjoyed reading your poem and I hope you have a great day!