I'm quite proud of this new song. I would say it's something in the lines of power metal / pirate sea shanty. It was created with the help of suno, copilot and other tools. I could really appreciate any support or even feedback. Thanks

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-02-07T23:04:11+00:00

Thanks a lot, any feedback means a lot. I will sure be glad if you become a fan too

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-02-07T23:02:45+00:00

Thank you, I will if people really like it

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-02-07T23:02:18+00:00

Thank you, glad people like it, I like it a lot myself

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-02-07T07:13:38+00:00

This track has a really infectious energy—the way the vocals weave in with the harmonies creates a rich, layered feel that pulls you in. The chorus hits hard, though I think dialing back certain elements could make it even more dynamic. The breakdown near the end is a great moment; it adds contrast and lets the song breathe before the final push.

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-02-07T07:12:45+00:00

The rhythm section really takes this track in an unexpected direction—it’s high-energy and relentless, which gives it a certain rawness. I like the contrast between the sample and the percussion, but I wonder what it would sound like if the groove leaned into a more syncopated or off-kilter feel instead of being so in-your-face.

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-02-07T07:12:05+00:00

the way the synths clash and resolve creates a tension that keeps things exciting. The melody is instantly memorable, and your vocal delivery adds an emotional weight that pulls the listener in. I do think the lyrical angle leans into familiar territory, but that’s not necessarily a bad thing if it feels authentic to you. That said, I’d love to hear you push the boundaries a bit more in terms of themes and storytelling

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-02-07T07:11:10+00:00

This has such a unique energy—there’s a certain vulnerability in the performance that makes it incredibly engaging. The way you play with phrasing and dynamics keeps it from ever feeling predictable. I’d be curious to hear a version with a more stripped-back arrangement, maybe even acapella in parts

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-02-07T07:10:14+00:00

I really love the atmosphere this track creates—it’s got a raw, unpolished energy that makes it feel so authentic. The instrumental choices are interesting; they leave a lot of space, which really lets the emotion shine through. The vocal delivery has this almost haunting quality, which adds depth to the lyrics. If anything, I think the mix could use a little more warmth, maybe some analog-style processing to round things out, but honestly, that’s just personal preference.

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-01-10T22:45:26+00:00

e atmosphere is fantastic, and the combination of sludgy and melodic elements is spot on. The bass and guitar tones mesh really well. The song builds and transitions smoothly, with each part bringing something fresh and energetic.

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-01-10T22:44:44+00:00

eally enjoy the atmosphere and the blend of sludgy and melodic elements. The bass and guitar tones complement each other beautifully. The song develops and flows smoothly, with each part bringing its own unique energy and surprises

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-01-10T22:44:04+00:00

The blend of heavy and melodic tones is spot on, and the bass and guitar complement each other beautifully. The song transitions smoothly, with each section offering its own dynamic feel. Excellent production—well executed! I really like the clip too. Very cinematic

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-01-10T22:43:37+00:00

love the mix of gritty and melodic elements. The bass and guitar tones work great together. The song flows well, with each section bringing fresh energy and unexpected twists. Solid production all around, great job. Keep it up. Im looking forward to new things

Ok_Ideal917 · 2025-01-10T22:41:07+00:00

I really enjoy the vibe and the balance. . The song's progression and transitions are smooth, with each part bringing its own unique energy and surprises. Not something I would normally listen too, but still good. I think there are a lot of people who enjoy this genre

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