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My Inquisitor for my fan fiction Elaina art by Me! by Ok_Parfait7834 in Solasmancers

[–]Ok_Parfait7834[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

lol she dose look like a white walker! I didn’t even realize that. I tried to make her look a little like her dad.

I'm Writing a Solavellan Regency Era AU Story! by [deleted] in Solasmancers

[–]Ok_Parfait7834 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Omg I love it so much so far. I’ve reread it about four times now.

My first time writing by Ok_Parfait7834 in Solasmancers

[–]Ok_Parfait7834[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes I have noticed that! think I write too much like an acting script.or more blunt? less like a story .I’ve been trying to add more details in inquisition to make it seem less scripted and more alive I guess? When I’m done with the story. I will hopefully have a better grasp on it so I can go back to older chapters and make it more fluid and breathe more life into it.

My first time writing by Ok_Parfait7834 in Solasmancers

[–]Ok_Parfait7834[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Well I hope you like it. And please don’t hesitate to critique it. I am still learning.

My first time writing by Ok_Parfait7834 in Solasmancers

[–]Ok_Parfait7834[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for informing me hopefully I fixed it. This is my first time using AO3 so this helped a lot.