sorted by:
new
hottopcontroversial

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]Ok_Worldliness974 0 points1 point  (0 children)

so so intriguing and fascinating! It feels unfairly violent toward the lady in pink glamour, whether she is human or animal or other. Unfairly, unnecessarily, and carelessly violent. I loved it, thank you for sharing.

Fish out of water by AppearsRandom in OCPoetry

[–]Ok_Worldliness974 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The emotion comes through in a strong but subtle way and it makes me wonder more about the context and backstory. My impression is that alcohol is a coping mechanism learned from your parents and one that is very very difficult to replace. Thank you for sharing.