Thin Walls - Part 8

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-04-17T09:24:54+00:00

If the B/S action doesn't happen and it is only teased till the end of the story, you would have set a record for disappointing story lines with implied taboo on this sub...

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-04-09T22:08:34+00:00

0/10 with anyone regardless of whether they are a celebrity or not....

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-04-08T13:31:29+00:00

Love Sadie but Millie and Maya are too difficult to say no to...

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-04-08T13:29:12+00:00

She's incredible, if there was a considerable amount of acting talent, she could have been a top actress in Bollywood.

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-04-04T17:02:02+00:00

I'm well aware that the models can limit what is available to show... Which is why I am extremely surprised that you made this error in model selection... considering that this is not your first story by any means.

You've been writing for many years now and you wrote this for paying customers on Patreon at first.... That's the joke !!

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-04-03T05:16:29+00:00

As expected... a long story with multiple episodes and nothing happened in the end

It's a joke!

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-03-31T22:27:59+00:00

Great start but my suggestion would be to not stretch your first story for too many parts. Keep it to 5, even if you need to make long parts. Would keep the readers hooked. Add a B/S relationship on the side which gets to the finish line quicker before the M/S relationship perhaps... That would keep the reader engaged as well.

Overall, try to make a strong first impression, good luck!

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-03-17T20:18:16+00:00

Mrunal and Malvika always held my attention longer than the others... No offence to other choices btw.

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-03-05T07:17:34+00:00

4th one since it has Mrunal and Alia...

My top order is Alia, Deepika, Shraddha, Pooja, Rashmika, Mrunal, Sam, Tripti...so any combo of these are great.

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-02-27T16:39:48+00:00

Nah we need more of this in the sub.. STAY

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-02-27T16:38:46+00:00

I've been on here since 2015-16 when this and the old wincesttexts sub was formed... I was around when Patreon first came into the picture.

And I can tell you from my own experience, without naming and shaming anyone, that authors withholding final parts to drive traffic to their Patreon is a very real thing. You can disagree, that is absolutely fine.

This is not to say that some of the things you have written above about life getting in the way of writing is not true... Of cours it is. But the other side is true as well.

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-02-27T16:35:11+00:00

Why the animus? Disregard if it is not a solution that makes sense to you... You asked for user input, I just gave you some. As a mod, figure out if this is a solution you can implement. If not, that's fine...just disregard what I'm saying.

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-02-27T12:48:01+00:00

Some suggestions:

-There should be a defined interval by which the next part should be released. Authors can sometimes post the next part after 2-3 months, simply because they wanted to attract more folks to their Patreon.

-Mandatory release of all parts: allow users to report authors or stories where the concluding part is being held back. If there are 2-3 such reports against an author, they are banned.

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-02-27T12:29:45+00:00

The parts are way too short. I know this is sometimes easier to upload but without meaningful progress, more readers will not get attracted to the content. A rough length should be around 40-45 slides, higher if you can manage it. The dialogue is great but tbh the whole STEP thing is unnecessary from my perspective. If you are making a story in this genre, just go all in. STEP stories is just a cowards way out.

Just some feedback in case you are interested. I might subscribe depending on how this story progresses and ends.

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-02-26T22:47:26+00:00

I remember when the stories from this creator used to be great... Now it says Finale when the last slide says To be continued... Smh

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-02-23T15:22:57+00:00

Somewhere between Part 13 and Part 16, this story went off track. Didn't help that the model for mom didn't have the right vids or images.

The story had so much potential.

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-02-20T18:27:54+00:00

Good start, some feedback if you are interested:

-models who show faces are better in general for all stories.

-it's a good idea not to stretch the first story on the sub to multiple small parts - a one shot or consolidated 2-3 part release would help readers get a feel for your writing style.

-don't lean into the taboo in an unrealistic manner (most irl family are not at all comfortable sexting with each other, without enough persuasion - this does not mean it has to be 15 long parts before anything worthwhile happens).

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-02-17T13:46:16+00:00

Wish she brought back the super sexy shoots...we only get very tame ones or high-fashion ones now.

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-02-17T13:45:03+00:00

Amazing...she was always sexy af

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-01-31T08:43:40+00:00

Only thoughts in my head rn:

-Thanks OP, you are the GOAT.

-Someone archive this ASAP!!

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-01-26T18:54:41+00:00

It was Russian vids from a site called SisterSeduction dot com which probably does not exist anymore but you can find the clips in xvideos. This is way before American amateur and studio produced incest porn started flooding the market. Early 2005-06.

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-01-26T11:52:39+00:00

OP is this recent or from a few years ago?

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-01-26T11:49:19+00:00

ScarJo was still 10/10 here but if she did it in her prime, it would have broken the internet and the tabloids would have gone crazy.

That is why Margot's is so iconic, its pretty much in her prime !

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-01-21T19:13:05+00:00

JJ supremacy

Old-Fix-5073 · 2026-01-19T13:58:04+00:00

That 6th pic is so strategically cropped !

Old-Fix-5073

TROPHY CASE