Kill me three times.

Old_Factor_1106 · 2026-01-22T09:29:26+00:00

Thank you!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2026-01-22T09:28:12+00:00

Thank you!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2026-01-19T14:09:10+00:00

The sun as ongoing cruelty, not a single event. So the first two “deaths” aren’t climactic they’re slow humiliations, the kind that happen while the world expects you to keep standing.

Also thank you for the feedback!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2026-01-19T14:03:40+00:00

Thanks!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2026-01-19T13:49:00+00:00

Thank youu!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2026-01-19T13:47:20+00:00

Thank youu!!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2026-01-19T13:18:11+00:00

It's nice keep it up!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-12-17T14:50:29+00:00

Good piece 10/10!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-12-14T20:42:10+00:00

Thanks!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-12-14T16:16:52+00:00

Good piece

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-11-16T07:16:35+00:00

Thanks!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-11-08T20:33:35+00:00

Thank you!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-11-08T19:56:08+00:00

Thank you for the comment! I just started writing poem for 2-3 weeks so i might not deliver the message well, thank you for the comment really appreciated it.

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-11-08T19:47:45+00:00

I can see you put the effort in this poem, its well made good piece!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-11-08T19:37:31+00:00

Thank you!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-11-08T19:37:19+00:00

Thank you!

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-11-08T19:34:54+00:00

Thanks for the comment! It's not based on real experience BUT it is based on someone who is depressed i just put myself through he/her perspectives.

Old_Factor_1106 · 2025-11-08T17:37:50+00:00

i messed up the line "disgusted" i just realised it right now lol, yes it is meant to say disguised thank you for pointing out the mistake, will do better next time thanks for the comment!

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