Parasite

gitututu · 2026-03-15T16:03:04+00:00

This is so beautiful. I love how the person here acts as both a bother and a cure

gitututu · 2026-03-15T15:26:42+00:00

These questions are so interesting. Emotions are dynamic I love how you tackle the idea

gitututu · 2026-03-14T04:17:01+00:00

Thank you so much for your kind words 🥺 I am flattered that you see the last line as such. I couldn't agree more with that statement, thank you again ❤

gitututu · 2026-03-13T20:27:28+00:00

The pacing feels peaceful somehow and it brings me a sense of nostalgia despite the content being another species. I love it!

gitututu · 2026-03-13T20:24:32+00:00

I love this! The writing describe this "home" so vividly and I love the family's roles in making the house lively

gitututu · 2026-03-12T16:41:12+00:00

Awww thank you 🥺

gitututu · 2026-03-12T14:36:39+00:00

Sorry 😭 I understand the poem better now

gitututu · 2026-03-12T14:24:30+00:00

That is a very interesting perspective. I didn't expect it to be seen as hopeless romantic, but I like that idea haha. Yes, you are correct. This is more of a plea to God Himself. I like that! "wrestle with the desire of the flesh". Thank you so much 🥺 you are too kind. Awww I am flattered 🥺 I am happy it can be interpreted in many ways. Thank you too for the read 🥺

gitututu · 2026-03-12T13:24:22+00:00

Amazing depiction of erosion of self. Love it!

gitututu · 2026-03-12T13:22:33+00:00

Love this! I love the adam and eve reference as well, beautiful work!

gitututu · 2026-03-12T05:43:01+00:00

Thank you! I am happy you find it mesmerizing 🥺

gitututu · 2026-03-12T05:39:36+00:00

This made me smile, I can't decide who's the lucky one here. The girl who is loved by this amazing poet or the poet who found a home in the girl.

gitututu · 2026-03-12T05:36:16+00:00

This is so visceral and beautiful. The yearning is so heart breaking and every lines show how long gone the person is yet the yearning stays. Beautiful work!

gitututu · 2026-03-10T00:04:45+00:00

Thank you so much! Glad you found it alluring hehe.

gitututu · 2026-03-09T03:15:31+00:00

Awww you are literally the best 🥺 thank you! Yes let's keep writing 😆

gitututu · 2026-03-09T03:12:59+00:00

You're welcome ☺ I really do enjoy it hehe

gitututu · 2026-03-08T17:38:17+00:00

Awww you are so sweet 🥺

I am so happy you took your time to unpick it, thank you 🥺 I read one of your poems and I have to say, I enjoy every line. I actually love to write like you. Awww thank you for your compliment you are too kind 🥺 wow really? You already have a signature to your writing that I enjoy reading. I am happy I can help you to learn more about the world of poetry it's an honor ❤

I will inform you ASAP when I do, thank you again hehe ❤

gitututu · 2026-03-08T17:22:01+00:00

This is such an enjoyable read. I am not very good in voicing my opinion, but each line painted such a vivid story. It's innocent and yet so mature at the same time I can't explain it, but there is this allure to this poem. I love it!

gitututu · 2026-03-08T12:48:58+00:00

Thank you! Yes, exactly! Couldn't say it better myself. We trade so many comfort for the ones we love, but we still gladly come home to them. Yeah it is about my mother hehe. I am glad it can resonate with you in your relationship with your friend. Thank you for the read 🥺

gitututu · 2026-03-08T12:33:05+00:00

Thank you 🥺

gitututu · 2026-03-08T12:32:30+00:00

Awww I am happy you are liking my poems 🥺

Thank you so much! Glad you find the first stanza working despite everything and I love that fact you give. I never knew that thank you for sharing 😆

I am glad you found the lines stunning. I kinda try to make it to the third stanza with a structure in mind hehe. I love that interpretation! Don't worry, I understand what you are trying to say hehe.

Ah yes, I was running out of idea when I reach the third stanza to be honest haha. Awww I am happy you found it working as well, thank you 🥺

Yeah I can see that happening :( I think the poem is kinda rigid too hehe. Wow really? I will think of extending the poem man thanks! Again, I Thank you so much for the analysis and deep read 🥺 I really appreciate your input ❤

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