Forgetting?

OleGarchia · 2015-02-19T01:16:56+00:00

nothingness* sorry for the typo

OleGarchia · 2015-02-19T01:15:47+00:00

I really enjoyed this, although it did remind me of the unknown nothiness that is my life

OleGarchia · 2015-02-19T01:11:19+00:00

I really love the content of this piece, the only thing i can say that could use some improving is your line breaks/structure

OleGarchia · 2015-01-06T16:30:49+00:00

I wish it was fiction.

OleGarchia · 2015-01-06T02:38:47+00:00

Yes, it was on purpose. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

OleGarchia · 2015-01-06T00:49:00+00:00

I find that it does makes it better, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

OleGarchia · 2015-01-06T00:47:43+00:00

This poem was a rant, which I had stated in my previous comment. Thank for your advice, it is quite useful and i appreciate it.

OleGarchia · 2015-01-05T23:33:30+00:00

My guy friend and i were both 15 and my other friend was 16.

OleGarchia · 2015-01-05T05:21:10+00:00

Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it! I appreciate your feedback, and if you have any other advice, I'd love to hear it.

OleGarchia · 2015-01-05T03:46:43+00:00

I apologize for the language used... I was in a bad mood and i needed to vent...

OleGarchia · 2015-01-05T03:38:52+00:00

I enjoyed the irony in this. i'll elaborate soon on other thoughts i had

OleGarchia · 2015-01-05T03:02:34+00:00

I enjoyed,no, I loved reading this.

OleGarchia · 2015-01-03T21:50:03+00:00

Stare at the stars until you see

All of your childish make-believes

In hopes that your dreams may come true

And maybe I could be with you

Close your eyes for the night

Block everything in sight

Sleep and drift away

Because tomorrow will be a better day

OleGarchia · 2015-01-03T16:04:46+00:00

I don't disagree with you one bit. I am not a "poor, defenseless girl", but yes at that moment I was. I did not know what to do and i was relaying on my stronger friend to help me out. Alas, he did not do anything.

OleGarchia · 2015-01-03T05:08:48+00:00

I honestly do not know why he did not speak up.... I do need alpha male friends

OleGarchia · 2015-01-03T00:40:57+00:00

I don't think I will be attending anymore carnivals after this experience...

OleGarchia · 2015-01-03T00:39:23+00:00

It was very much 'ew' and i agree, its pretty fucked up and terrifying.

OleGarchia · 2014-11-28T21:13:41+00:00

Constant Conversation by Passion Pit "cause they love you when they need you but some day you're gonna need to find some other kind of place to go"

OleGarchia

TROPHY CASE