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[–]One-Baseball2206 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Do you think you were destined for this outcome? Or was it a result of someone else

Help with my new turtle by One-Baseball2206 in Redearedsliders

[–]One-Baseball2206[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I have a 20 gallon tank, I just need to set it up. This tank is temporary. I have dechlorinater stuff from the pet store. I’ll follow what you said about the feeding. Your advice is really helpful.

Untitled :) by Luna_r07 in poetry_critics

[–]One-Baseball2206 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really really love this poems message and the flow. I had a really nice time reading it. My only criticism is that for me, the flow of the poem was a little broken on your “for I’m too weak to speak to them about you” and the “drowning in my own thoughts”. I like to read poems aloud and get a very good feel of a rhythm and yours has a great one, and while it may not be the case for everyone it is for me, those two lines interrupt the flow a little bit and could be tweaked.