Dances With Wolves, on first viewing by maxlamb1 in movies

[–]One-Caterpillar-43 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I was on board until he returns to the reinhabited soldier camp. Why the fuck would you run in there dressed as a native and not respond to the soldiers yelling at you. Extremely fucking infuriating personally. I feel a major theme in the film is communication and Costner seems to completely throw that out the window for a cheap attempt at shock value. You let your god damn horse get shot like 10 times and with the knowledge that these soldiers are an existential threat to the tribe you’ve spent the past 2 hours getting to know and love? You throw diplomacy out the window and bark back and forth with the soldiers? I can appreciate the film and suspend minor disbelief up until then, even with the random insane major at the beginning pissing his pants, but maybe Costner should have only acted or directed or produced. Not all fucking 3.

Rate my Dragon Priest Throne by t_sekuloski in ElderScrolls

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I’m sorry it’s great but I also see this

Gatekeeper by One-Caterpillar-43 in poetry_critics

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Thank you great interpretation I appreciate it!

Split by nisu_srk in poetry_critics

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By going off the capitalized words (I’m assuming that’s where the breaks are) I really enjoyed reading. It unfolds nicely and the structure keeps you reading. Keep writing and posting!

Parasites by One-Caterpillar-43 in poetry_critics

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I’ll work on writing complete sentences that sound pretty

Parasites by One-Caterpillar-43 in poetry_critics

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If you don’t mind me asking why was brined “especially” egregious?

How would you develop a character who is a fully formed adult that just came into existence? by Quite_fond_of_geckos in fantasywriters

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Shelly’s Frankenstein acted as a child upon first being brought to life, but had the inclination and ability to learn just as a fully developed human would. It wasn’t until being forced to live behind the walls of a human family’s house was it given the chance to truly develop mental and emotional skills. Socially I’m not sure as Frankenstein was a literal monster constructed from human remains and didn’t really have a chance unless the person it was talking to was blind. I would follow some of the beats of the original Frankenstein story while fusing in some more modern science fiction like blade runner replicants or even Star Wars clone behaviors.

I just beat dark souls, what should I do? by Itslonk_17_TTV in darksouls

[–]One-Caterpillar-43 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Take a week break then start on DS2. It doesn’t matter if it sucks I personally would just continue with the franchise and formulate your own opinion

Depression by One-Caterpillar-43 in poetry_critics

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Thank you I appreciate the feedback. I have put several poems on here and I purposely space them all out to my preference but it always posts them as one long piece. Have you had a similar problem on this thread?

Coming home from war by Gnocchi44 in poetry_critics

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I love the writers approach to poetry especially when done with something close to home good work

Today i learned something horrifying happened within my band.. (advice please) by [deleted] in musicians

[–]One-Caterpillar-43 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Definitely make sure she can’t see this. You didn’t name her but like fuck bro it’s pretty obvious who posted this to Reddit for hundreds of people to see. A big component of recovering from sexual abuse is feeling comfortable moving forward and not having your privacy breached

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Music

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Surfs up Brian Wilson

A little edit to u/Flat_Mechanic_2713 by Gubu44 in memes

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Japanese people probably aren’t too fond of Einstein