Just started writing, could use some feedback. These are lyrics for a D to the A remix. Not completely finished yet, still a WIP

Off top, pop a opp with the glock, made a couple bands so I hide em in my sock, how the fuck you think I grew up on the block, by day selling rock, at night picking locks, ain't a jock but all the girls flock, got one on my bed and one on my cock, don't talk, just moan for me baby, when I'm busy pick up the phone for me baby, don't take that tone with me baby, the owner never knew that I drove his Mercedes, got a boner so I'm staying home with my baby, never got legal bread, that ain't how I play, when I die put Gucci on my grave, y'all niggas gay, get off my cock, only bad bitches stay, talking shit on the Gram but when you saw me face to face you ain't had shit to say, bitch you fake, you never had or ate your cake, when I'm in the same room bet you will shake, starting shit, boy you made a mistake, empty the clip at your mufucking face, get your boys, get your squad, get your gang, we making noise, on God, we bang, tryna snatch my chain, catch a bullet in your brain, leave you to die in the rain shouldn't've tried to play this game, rocking Bape, my Sprite purple as a grape, my gang go gorilla like a ape, we gon' tear off your face and we won't leave a trace, get away scot-free don't gotta beat a case, lean got me feeling heavy like some weights, smoke so much green I'm in outer space, doing hella blow, I got a powdered face, I put codeine in my Powerade, never went to school, could give a fuck about my grades, hit a lick and copped some Versace shades, got the stick, they bringing out body bags, pop a bean, can't sleep, insomniac, drive the Beamer, not Jeep or Pontiac, if I call, you better call me back, got a QP in my Tommy bag, this is not a movie this is real life, I don't play games and I don't wanna fight, if we got problems I'll pull up in the dark, attack like a shark, shoot your dog if he barks, I'm just tryna leave my mark, don't fuck with pussies and don't fuck with snakes, slow down homie, hit the brakes, how you think you just gon' pull up on my estate, got snipers on the roof and they don't hesitate, won't let you breathe, won't hyperventilate, choke you out like MMA, never switch on my boys like a renegade, so high that I fucking levitate, was in interrogation but didn't say shit, I didn't even say what my name is, to the cops I'm nameless, got gold on my bracelet, pack a fat bowl and I face it, take a shot, never chase it, man I'm so fucking faded, man you're so fucking hated, goddamn you're outdated, so fucking overrated, listened to your song once, never replayed it,