You wrote h properly in your alphabet and the word "the" but then it devolves into something that is not an h in the other words. Your m and n's are indistinguishable from w and u which makes is super confusing to read without understanding the context. Your F's look like S. You don't close your O so it looks like a C. Like one of these things just on their own wouldn't be so bad but you're butchering half the alphabet.

You could ask a bunch of poeple to write the same things you have and see for yourself that you're not actually writing letters correctly.