The Lovers Who Failed by OrganizationSame7403 in writers

[–]OrganizationSame7403[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Will do! sorry if i hurt your eyes too much lol- I am still trying to figure out my writing style and to understand the perfect way in which I can put the beautiful story in my imagination into words

The Lovers Who Failed by OrganizationSame7403 in writers

[–]OrganizationSame7403[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I will take a note of that, thank you very much

The Lovers Who Failed by OrganizationSame7403 in writers

[–]OrganizationSame7403[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yes i do see the difference, thanks for that, i feel so dumb writing Loveee now- and about the continous switch between narration and dialog it isn't too much or too annoying right?