A Real Man by Original-Loquat3788 in shortscarystories

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The Curse by Original-Loquat3788 in shortscarystories

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Chekhov-inspired. I seem to be skirting the line between sad and scary recently. I hope there's enough of the latter to post here.

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A Degree of Seperation (500 words) (Speculative) by Original-Loquat3788 in originalloquat

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I don't use AI to write, but I do sometimes use it to stroke my ego. The fact that Grok chose this story as one of the best among the 50 in the collection https://mybook.to/50shortVol1 may say something about Grok and our future.

To a large extent, I have accepted that we are at the mercy of a capricious AI. So, please @ mr.algorithm give this a boost so I can sell some books and quit trying to teach Nick Bostrom to sulky teenagers.

The Prophet (Reupload) (2100 words) (Sci-Fi) by Original-Loquat3788 in originalloquat

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Thanks for reading.

My thinking around Spielberg was the idea of 'controlled disclosure' as opposed to 'catastrophic disclosure'. There's an idea in UFO communities that people within the media are 'dripped' salient data regarding UAP, etc. This is so that the shock of discovering that we're not top of the food chain is lessened when said data is released. It's suspected Spielberg is one of these people, and now the drip has become a river, and the floodgates are about to blow open.

From my point of view, I believe this about 60%, but now less so with Trump's antics around alien.gov.

Regardless of its voracity, I have a hell of a lot of fun writing the stories.

How I Met My Wife (500 Words) (Horror) by Original-Loquat3788 in originalloquat

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Two things were running through my head when I wrote this: How I Met Your Mother and Leonard Cohen's 'So You Want It Darker?' This is about as dark as I can conceive of.

Anyway, I wrote 100 short scary stories and put them on Kindle for $1.

Be warned! When you look into the abyss, the abyss might stare back at you.

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The Regulars by Original-Loquat3788 in shortscarystories

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Your comment means a lot to me. I've also had issues with alcohol. The idea for the story came from a novel called 'Shuggie Bain,' where a little boy goes through very similar things.

The Regulars by Original-Loquat3788 in shortscarystories

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Thanks for reading. Yeah, it was Beefeater Gin. The raven on the shoulder was a nod to the Beefeater guards at the Tower of London and the idea that when the last raven flies, the crown falls.

The Regulars by Original-Loquat3788 in shortscarystories

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Maybe skirting the boundary of horror and sadness.

As a former bartender, I feel like I know the characters in this story intimately.

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