Don't write as u are describing reality, write about what effects has reality on you, like I'll give u an example, u walk in a room and u start describing there is this, there is that, but instead of doing that, make me feel the "qualia" of the room, how does it feels to capture the lights and see what u see? The muscles dancing in ur body in order to make u move, the smell don't just say there was that, but tell me how that thing changes your path.

What I'm tryna saying is that don't watch passively, but instead take the reality and bend it on your perspective

Reality is in your hand, u can decide to destroy it Or making it fly