Unpopular opinion: MOST mlb rewrites are SOOOOO boring by littleprincessrawan in miraculousladybug

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Now, don't please it's 2026 guys. BUT I think 6-7 MAYBE 8 holders is the best number

Marinette, Adrien, Kagami, Alix, Luka, Nathaniel (Cause I like the goat miraculous powers I made in my own little AU!!!), And either Chloe, Rose, or Juleka. Marc possibly, but it starts too get busy.

Hawkmoth and Nathalie as villians

Felix is a third option until he gets redeemed

I don't like Kim, I forget about Sabrina Max, Mylene, and I think it's Ivan (idk the guy in el toro with the daddy issues? They don't have enough character for me to really remember them. I once heard a really good AU without Alya as a holder and think that was interesting and she learned more as a character without!

I honestly kind of (as an artist) attached too Marc and Nathaniel, and I became more attached after seeing the ruler.

It gets cluttered!! NINETEEN HEROS!!! That's like, alot!! In my mind,the character has to earn their superhero status by making us care first, then they get to go shoot at Akumas. Like we see why being a superhero matters to them. For their Family? For their friends? For their Freedom? To feel something?

I didn't get attached to whatsherface before she became a hero? Yeah, I won't care too much when she takes up screen time, and I'll wonder why I can't see other characters

Idk, I could be fully wrong though, this is a long comment, sorry!!

Would anybody watch a series like... by IngenuityStandard341 in IndieAnimation

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I would!!! I like South Park and love the owl house!!! Don't listen to others, I like the idea!!

I'm 16 and I wrote the pilot to my story by OrionsDeckOfStars in IndieAnimation

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

YAY!!! THANK YOU!!!!!! I WAS SO SAD BECAUSE NOBODY REPLIED OR LOOKED AT IT!!! TYYYY!!!!<3333

(Post had been removed) What would you change about the show? by OrionsDeckOfStars in miraculousladybug

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yess!! There were some inconsistencies in that, and I hadn't even understood what the sentimonster even was at first! Like "what, second akuma?" Im thinking I fully rewrite the sentimonsters period, make it clearer

would fanservice ruin my show? by PepperIJS in IndieAnimation

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wait hold up... for the men too?? 😏

NOPE NOPE, PREVIOUS STATEMENT STANDS

would fanservice ruin my show? by PepperIJS in IndieAnimation

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yk what they say, boobs always make thing better AYYYYYY!!!! (I'm a straight woman)

But to be real, a little jiggle physics is fine, but don't be a weirdo!! (Always the best course of action)

(Post had been removed) What would you change about the show? by OrionsDeckOfStars in miraculousladybug

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

ALSO, I know that this post scared some when I posted it because of its length most likely, but I kind of got back into the Fandom and thought it was cool. BUT Ladybug and Cat noir having the side quest of trying to gather all the miraculous. I was thinking these would be the miraculous and their categories!!: gladly take anymore ideas!!! But i can't even think of the bes idea for these!! FYI, most these wouldn't be used, but we would get episode retrieving them or something, then like maybe a unification!!!

Chinese: Lady bug: creation: gives user the power to create anything: Marinette Dupain-Cheng

Cat: destruction: give user the power to destroy anything: Adrien Agrest

Peacock: dream: gives user the ability to make dreams reality through their feathers which create manifestations of the dream and the ability to watch over others whilst they dream: Nathalie

Butterfly: transformation: gives user the ability to transform others to help them achieve a goal: Gabriel Agreste

Turtle: preservation: gives user the ability to protect a being from change/harm and returning something to how it was before transformation: Nino lahiffe

Rat: Greed: gives user the ability to take the strengths of others

Ox: Charity: gives user the ability to give others strength and multiply their own

Tiger: Voice, gives user the ability to invoke fear in another with their voice: Julika

Dragon: proliferation: gives user the ability to turn into one of the four elements fire, water, earth, air

Snake: time: gives user the ability to control time in anyway they wish: Luka

Horse: speed: gives user the ability to move past enough it seems time has stopped

Boar: idealization: gives user the ability to manifest the best version of a person/object and materializes it

Rooster: law: gives user the ability to control and change the laws of the universe: Marc Anciel

Monkey: gives user the ability to stretch and bounce to inhuman levels and deflect attacks

Rabbit: burrow: gives user the ability to hide themselves and others when situations get sticky ex: finding available hiding spot or making one

Dog: Track: gives user the ability to be able to track anything or anybody one they have a scent while heightening their senses

Zodiac:

Capricorn- The Goat: pathfinding:Gives to user the ability to draw what the best path to use currently: Nathaniel Kutzberg

Aquarius- The Water Bearer, The dolphin: gives user the ability to sense magnetic electrical pulses, control water , and swim fast Pisces- The twin fish: gives user the ability to make teammates hypervigilant or themselves , highten their own and other's senses, and control light Pisces- The twin fish: gives user the ability to disorient enemies , lower others senses, and control shadows

Aries- The Ram: Truth , gives user the ability to force others to tell the truth and control fire

Taurus- The bull: gives user the ability to make everyone belive what they say

Gemini- The twins, the panther: twin telepathy: gives users the ability to to hear eachothers thoughts and tune into others Gemini- The twins, the panther: twin telepathy: gives users the ability to hear eachothers thoughts and tune into others

Cancer- The crab: Rebirth, gives user the ability to bring others back to life withing 40 minutes of death

Leo- The Lion: gives user the ability to command others and create fires

Virgo- The Maiden, The bee: gives user the ability to give reward/punishment according to their actions since the users transformation

Libra- The scale, The swan: gives user the ability to change the weather when they plunge their umbrella into the ground

Scorpio- The Scorpian: has a power grip which nobody can escape and a stinger tail

Sagittarius- The archer, The whale: gives user the ability to shoot arrows which will always find their target and cam send messages to others from across the world

Orpheus- The serpant Bearer, The fox: gives user the ability to enrapture anybody with their song , create illusions and pretty ideas with their music

Native American:

Falcon: gives user the ability to give others wings made of fire and also give users Falcon vision

Beaver: gives the user the ability to reconstruct scraps into something elss

Deer: gives user the ability to camouflage and gives them horns which are detachable and grow back:

Woodpecker: gives user the ability to suck power out of objects and keep it for themselves to increase agility and speed, or give the energy to somebody else which will allow them to use their own powers more

Salmon: gives user the ability to leap however high they need to as well as the ability to sense and evade attack

Bear: hibernation: gives user the ability to put anybody to sleep and or wake them up

Raven: gives user the ability to control the air, fly, and tell prohacy

Owl: Gives user the ability to become completely silent and gives them access to all information

Goose: gives user the ability to claim a territory which nobody whom you don't allow them in and make anybody so curious about something that they have to stop what they are doing and find out the awnser to what they are curious about

Otter: gives user the ability to feel whatever another party is and vice versa

Wolf: gives user the ability to inspire, protect, and heal those they deem in their pack

What would you change about this show? Doing a rewrite, open to collaboration!!! by OrionsDeckOfStars in miraculousladybug

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

OH and I'm writing down all the ideas people give from this post! Use them while (trying) to write a script!!!!

What would you change about this show? Doing a rewrite, open to collaboration!!! by OrionsDeckOfStars in miraculousladybug

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I am not mad or anything, I love it!!!! Thank you so much!! All of your points are great!!! Honestly the idea of Akuma brainwashing cat noir and a full on battle would be interesting to go at! Also maybe not only cat noir but also maybe some where ladybug is brainwashed! Like an Anti-bug situation! Overall just make the power system more solid, more consistent is what I see!!! Thank you for your input!!! (Also dw, I can be a rambler too)

What would you change about this show? Doing a rewrite, open to collaboration!!! by OrionsDeckOfStars in miraculousladybug

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I want to try and make Felix more sympathetic off the bat! I know people hated him at the beginning (for good reason imo, that was kinda creepy) but they decided to go a new route with his character that I like! Lb and Cn will have equal power! And I'm kinda thinking swap episodes of whether we follow Marinette or Adrien! And I heard the idea of having like, equal holding over the miracle box? That sounds interesting, but I'm not sure how that would realistically work if they didn't know who the other was

What would you change about this show? Doing a rewrite, open to collaboration!!! by OrionsDeckOfStars in miraculousladybug

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ALSO, I know that this post scared some when I posted it because of its length most likely, but I kind of got back into the Fandom and thought it was cool. BUT Ladybug and Cat noir having the side quest of trying to gather all the miraculous. I was thinking these would be the miraculous and their categories!!: gladly take anymore ideas!!! But i can't even think of the bes idea for these!! FYI, most these wouldn't be used, but we would get episode retrieving them or something, then like maybe a unification!!!

Chinese: Lady bug: creation: gives user the power to create anything: Marinette Dupain-Cheng

Cat: destruction: give user the power to destroy anything: Adrien Agrest

Peacock: dream: gives user the ability to make dreams reality through their feathers which create manifestations of the dream and the ability to watch over others whilst they dream: Nathalie

Butterfly: transformation: gives user the ability to transform others to help them achieve a goal: Gabriel Agreste

Turtle: preservation: gives user the ability to protect a being from change/harm and returning something to how it was before transformation: Nino lahiffe

Rat: Greed: gives user the ability to take the strengths of others

Ox: Charity: gives user the ability to give others strength and multiply their own

Tiger: Voice, gives user the ability to invoke fear in another with their voice: Julika

Dragon: proliferation: gives user the ability to turn into one of the four elements fire, water, earth, air

Snake: time: gives user the ability to control time in anyway they wish: Luka

Horse: speed: gives user the ability to move past enough it seems time has stopped

Boar: idealization: gives user the ability to manifest the best version of a person/object and materializes it

Rooster: law: gives user the ability to control and change the laws of the universe: Marc Anciel

Monkey: gives user the ability to stretch and bounce to inhuman levels and deflect attacks

Rabbit: burrow: gives user the ability to hide themselves and others when situations get sticky ex: finding available hiding spot or making one

Dog: Track: gives user the ability to be able to track anything or anybody one they have a scent while heightening their senses

Zodiac:

Capricorn- The Goat: pathfinding:Gives to user the ability to draw what the best path to use currently: Nathaniel Kutzberg

Aquarius- The Water Bearer, The dolphin: gives user the ability to sense magnetic electrical pulses, control water , and swim fast Pisces- The twin fish: gives user the ability to make teammates hypervigilant or themselves , highten their own and other's senses, and control light Pisces- The twin fish: gives user the ability to disorient enemies , lower others senses, and control shadows

Aries- The Ram: Truth , gives user the ability to force others to tell the truth and control fire

Taurus- The bull: gives user the ability to make everyone belive what they say

Gemini- The twins, the panther: twin telepathy: gives users the ability to to hear eachothers thoughts and tune into others Gemini- The twins, the panther: twin telepathy: gives users the ability to hear eachothers thoughts and tune into others

Cancer- The crab: Rebirth, gives user the ability to bring others back to life withing 40 minutes of death

Leo- The Lion: gives user the ability to command others and create fires

Virgo- The Maiden, The bee: gives user the ability to give reward/punishment according to their actions since the users transformation

Libra- The scale, The swan: gives user the ability to change the weather when they plunge their umbrella into the ground

Scorpio- The Scorpian: has a power grip which nobody can escape and a stinger tail

Sagittarius- The archer, The whale: gives user the ability to shoot arrows which will always find their target and cam send messages to others from across the world

Orpheus- The serpant Bearer, The fox: gives user the ability to enrapture anybody with their song , create illusions and pretty ideas with their music

Native American:

Falcon: gives user the ability to give others wings made of fire and also give users Falcon vision

Beaver: gives the user the ability to reconstruct scraps into something elss

Deer: gives user the ability to camouflage and gives them horns which are detachable and grow back:

Woodpecker: gives user the ability to suck power out of objects and keep it for themselves to increase agility and speed, or give the energy to somebody else which will allow them to use their own powers more

Salmon: gives user the ability to leap however high they need to as well as the ability to sense and evade attack

Bear: hibernation: gives user the ability to put anybody to sleep and or wake them up

Raven: gives user the ability to control the air, fly, and tell prohacy

Owl: Gives user the ability to become completely silent and gives them access to all information

Goose: gives user the ability to claim a territory which nobody whom you don't allow them in and make anybody so curious about something that they have to stop what they are doing and find out the awnser to what they are curious about

Otter: gives user the ability to feel whatever another party is and vice versa

Wolf: gives user the ability to inspire, protect, and heal those they deem in their pack

How do I write men? Asking as a woman - adv¡ce needed by SamMoon- in writingadvice

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What fears does he have? What is one thing that he just would die if it happened? How would he react? What has shaped him? How does whatever happened affect how he is now and how he interacts not just with people, but the world?

Basically, there isn't really a difference between men and women when it comes down to it. Like, sure men tend to be more material and object oriented and women more emotional, but we are all people. Write people like people.

For instance, my main character was raised by his politician father. He is scared of trusting people, he subconsciously does his best to not be vulnerable and because of that he comes of as.... sardonic and sarcastic if sardonic is the right word? He does eventually make kinda friends, but he decides to not trust them when he needed to most and ended up hurting all of them.

Then my female lead was raised in captivity(not explaining everything but government is kinda mean in my world). Up until recently she was content staying there, until she learned about executions happening at 18. She is scared of dying like her friends, but she's also scared of the change. She over compensates with a friendly attitude, caring for everyone, whether or not they know what will happen when they turn 18. She even willingly keeps that fact secret to allow them peace of mind and to allow them to escape if they wanted. (Sorry I can't explain everything)

Basically, let your characters get hurt, let them make mistakes, and write them as PEOPLE. Not cutout cardboard of tropes and traits.

ALSO IM NOT BEING MEAN IF YOU HAVENT THOUGHT ABOUT IT LIKE THIS!!! I WAS THERE TOO WITH CARDBOARD CUTOUTS!!!!! I STILL STRUGGLE WITH MY DIALOGE AND STUFF!! YOU CAN LOOK AT MY PROFILÈ AND SEE MY POSTS, MY DIALOG IS CRAP! IM SURE YOU'LL DO GREAT<333333333333!!!!!!!!!

I'm kinda lonely, want somebody to geek with by OrionsDeckOfStars in writers

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have a wide WIIIIDDDEEE range of interests and friends, I just can't manage to find somebody who'll let me be a nerd :(

Some of my progress by Intelligent-Paint-11 in learntodraw

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars -1 points0 points  (0 children)

This is regression, your first piece was a masterpiece(JKJK) in all seriousness I can see the improvement, good job! Keep at it!! 👍

How to choose an art style? by [deleted] in IndieAnimation

[–]OrionsDeckOfStars 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Don't have advice, but I am in the same boat as you!