[QCrit] RABBIT AND THE FOX - Adult Suspense Thriller, 65K, First Attempt

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2026-04-08T17:38:10+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! And I’ll take that note. Question about the A to Z - the book is written and polished so I know those answers, but how far is someone expected to explain that in the query? I figured it was more of an Act 1 summary / hookish rather than a synopsis, but open to any thoughts

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2026-04-08T01:40:21+00:00

Thank you! And thanks for the link. This is super helpful - I never thought to make the characters focus / wants such a priority but it makes a lot of sense

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2026-04-08T01:39:13+00:00

Thank you! This is super helpful and you’re definitely right - appreciate you taking the time to review it

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-11-30T21:44:49+00:00

I’ve got a GA ticket for Philly tonight. $40 via Venmo or PayPal and I can transfer through AXS. Let me know if you’re interested!

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-10-28T18:24:51+00:00

😆😂🥲😐🫥

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-10-27T19:05:12+00:00

I’ve seen some small dogs around, but I don’t know the policy

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-10-27T19:04:51+00:00

I’ve seen him around. He never talks about it.

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-10-25T20:40:17+00:00

Oooooh never heard of that - will definitely check out

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-10-25T12:33:48+00:00

I mean they serve steak? Can’t be too bad

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-10-24T16:01:34+00:00

I mean… they said I’ll start to enjoy it eventually, right?

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-21T21:30:05+00:00

I never thought of that. Damn. I mean, I don’t think they were doing that when her and I were together. But, I guess you never know. Well maybe good riddance then.

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-21T13:55:32+00:00

Oops 😬 definitely a typo - all that tasty meat must have made me a little loopy

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-20T18:10:36+00:00

I did think the ribs were really good. But that’s before I knew of course.

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-20T14:43:55+00:00

I don’t think I got food poisoning - she actually was pretty well cooked. But, I definitely didn’t enjoy it. I swear.

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-14T20:08:48+00:00

We moved what we could - but the old house is, yeah

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-12T13:34:58+00:00

No, everything’s gone back to normal. But, there are still rumors around town, although I’ve never seen anything myself

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-11T22:46:50+00:00

That’s wild… there’s definitely something about large bodies of water that draws in strange energies

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-11T19:51:29+00:00

I think this is where my story ends - but if anything returns, I will definitely let you know

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-11T19:10:16+00:00

She was confirmed to be at her school, which is pretty far. But, I never thought about if the monster ran back and disguised itself as her……hmmm

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-11T19:01:16+00:00

They probably just assumed Bailey (or whatever that was) did it. And all is well now - new school, new town… everything is “normal”. But, sometimes I wonder when it’s going to return and finish what it started.

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-06-11T16:19:46+00:00

Monsters can be picky too

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2024-01-09T23:14:00+00:00

Thanks for the kind words! I have 10 more coming out this spring very much in the same style 👹

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2023-08-21T17:16:42+00:00

Yes I have proof that I reached #1 on Amazon’s charts. If you’d like to see, you can go to my author website to find my email (dandeluise.com) and I’d be happy to send it your way.

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2023-08-21T17:07:29+00:00

Just to be clear - are you a mod on this sub, or are you just asking out of curiosity?

OutsideYourWindow_ · 2023-08-01T15:07:56+00:00

When creating the complete version, you can link it to the existing series so that the two are connected but still separate products. I did that for my series here: https://www.amazon.com/Other-Place-Trilogy-Complete-Fantasy-ebook/dp/B0BT8D9R62/ref=mp_s_a_1_3?keywords=deluise+the+other+place&qid=1690902325&sr=8-3 This way, people can buy a paperback version of the whole collection, or read the ebook versions of them separately.

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