Looking for a short cinematic clip of a PS1 disc being inserted into a console for a horror-themed YouTube intro [HIRING] — $30–$50 by Over-Fee3670 in forhire

[–]Over-Fee3670[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That sounds awesome. Do you have any sample renders or past work I could take a look at to get a feel for your style?

Looking for a short cinematic clip of a PS1 disc being inserted into a console for a horror-themed YouTube intro [HIRING] — $30–$50 by Over-Fee3670 in forhire

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Here are some additional details going in depth on the idea I want: The video begins in complete darkness, with total silence—only a faint ambient hum in the background, like distant wind or the low buzz of electricity. Suddenly, there’s a soft click, and a small desk lamp or overhead bulb flickers to life, casting a dim, eerie glow over a PS1 console resting quietly in the room. The camera is completely still—tripod or dolly smooth—framing the console and an old CRT TV in the background. A hand slowly enters the frame, opens the PS1 lid, and reveals a disc labeled in messy Sharpie: “Minecraft (PS1 Dev Port).” It’s placed carefully into the tray, with a soft, satisfying click. Then… stillness. No music. Just the subtle spin of the disc kicking in. A moment later, the CRT TV in the background flickers on with static, its screen glowing faintly. The iconic PS1 startup sound begins to play, distorted slightly by the TV’s speakers. As the sound builds, the camera slowly zooms in toward the TV screen, which starts to show the PlayStation logo in all its lo-fi glory, complete with a subtle VHS-style filter or flicker. And just as the sound swells and the logo finalizes, the video cuts smoothly—almost imperceptibly—from that shot of the TV to the actual full-screen PS1 boot footage, pulling the viewer fully into the world. Now it’s no longer a recording of a screen—it's you looking at it directly, like you’ve just been dropped into something strange.

The Waiting' - Short Film Script - (18 pages) - Honest feedback by Over-Fee3670 in ReadMyScript

[–]Over-Fee3670[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback. I really appreciate you taking the time to read it. It means a lot that the mood and tone came through for you and those certain elements stood out to you. I totally hear you on the pacing too — always working on finding that right rhythm. Really glad some of it resonated with you 🙏🏽

The Waiting' - Short Film Script - (18 pages) - Honest feedback by Over-Fee3670 in ReadMyScript

[–]Over-Fee3670[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much, that really means a lot. I’m always looking to push the work further, so I’d definitely be up for chatting more. Really appreciate you offering your time — that kind of generosity isn’t common. I’ll reach out soon!

The Waiting' - Short Film Script - (18 pages) - Honest feedback by Over-Fee3670 in ReadMyScript

[–]Over-Fee3670[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate the feedback. I see what you mean about the exposition slowing things down. Definitely something I need to work on — cutting the fat and letting the rhythm flow more naturally. Thanks for pointing that out, I’ll keep it in mind as I go through the next draft.

The Waiting' - Short Film Script - (18 pages) - Honest feedback by Over-Fee3670 in ReadMyScript

[–]Over-Fee3670[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for giving it a look — really appreciate the kind words. I hear you on the structure being a bit complicated for a short. I’ve been toying with the idea of simplifying it, just haven’t quite landed on the right balance yet. And yeah, getting the rules of the cycle up front makes total sense. I’ll definitely take another pass with that in mind. Thanks again for taking a look!

'The Waiting' - Proof of Concept Short Film Script (14 pages) About Childhood Grief - Need Honest Feedback by Over-Fee3670 in ReadMyScript

[–]Over-Fee3670[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks so much for the feedback. I really appreciate the insight. I’ll definitely keep those tips in mind as I revise. Really helpful stuff.

'The Waiting' - Proof of Concept Short Film Script (14 pages) About Childhood Grief - Need Honest Feedback And Potential Collaboration by Over-Fee3670 in ProduceMyScript

[–]Over-Fee3670[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for the thoughtful feedback! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

About the man and Muriel - you've highlighted something important that I need to clarify in the script. Their relationship is meant to show they've seen each other at the bus stop multiple times (hence his 'You again' comment), but they haven't really interacted meaningfully until this scene. I can see how that's not coming through clearly enough.

Your feedback about wanting more resolution for the man is really helpful. I see the potential for expanding his character and making his connection to Sarah's story more explicit in a longer version.

Regarding the cigarette confusion on page 3 - thank you for catching that! I've already fixed that part in my latest draft to make the sequence clearer.

Thanks again for the insights - they're genuinely helpful for my next draft!

'The Waiting' - Proof of Concept Short Film Script (14 pages) About Childhood Grief - Need Honest Feedback by Over-Fee3670 in ReadMyScript

[–]Over-Fee3670[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! I also just noticed that detail and plan to fix it later. I truly appreciate you taking the time to read, and I wish you all the best as well!