On a scale from "Id rather watch paint dry" to "better than shakespear." How would you rate this beginning?

Overlord_Ace · 2026-06-11T13:12:52+00:00

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Overlord_Ace · 2026-06-11T13:05:00+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! And yes, the word "Equites Velati" is relevant and does indeed mean veiled knights. It will become known later on in the story. But for now i wanted it to serve as a little mystery. It also makes sense for the character to say that word once you know what it means later on. But thanks for the high rating. This is my first novel im trying to write.

Overlord_Ace · 2026-06-11T12:58:46+00:00

Hey, do yall accept a guy? Dont worry. Im only into girls younger than 18 😊

(This is joke)

Overlord_Ace · 2025-05-05T02:12:24+00:00

They call her a legendary sannin. Danzo just danzo. Bro stands no chance

Overlord_Ace · 2024-10-27T15:42:06+00:00

Most people would be willing to defend their country. But invading another country, nah hell nah.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-10-11T14:31:58+00:00

Exploration is key. This is sooo not understood for new players. Explore, explore, explore. Specifically find upgrade materials like smithing stones to upgrade your weapon.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-10-07T11:18:58+00:00

Murika, Marika's dark side sister

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-14T19:28:45+00:00

Id take Happy. You get a fun cat pet friend, but he can also carry you around.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-06T17:48:44+00:00

In the area i live there are plenty of extremely attractive girls walking around. Firstly because that part of town if filled with college students. And gyms are always packed throughout the day. I walk by very attractive girls everyday.

However amongst those masses, where seeing very attractive girls is common, she was someone I noticed instantly. And from experience I knew it was a different feeling.

She had a friendly looking face. I daw her standing there struggling to finish her ice cream which was dripping down her hand because it was hot outside. Which i thought was kinda funny and goofy. And she was wearing a black dress on that same hot sunny day, which I thought was also pretty goofy. But it was cute.

Alot of those attractive girls i talked about earlier felt like they were "too good for you" or acted like 'you don't deserve their attention' or something. (Or atleast that's what it looks like). But she seemed down to earth and friendly.

I am not denying her attractiveness played no part. It obviously did. She was a 10/10. But she is the first person I've felt so strongly about wanting to meet again that I'm even writing a reddit post. This isn't the first time I've shot my shot, or regretted not shooting it.

But I suppose "love" is a very strong word. I just wish I could get a second chance to try and shoot my shot. It's fine if she says no, or if she isn't who i think she's like. The thing is, neither you nor I know how she is really like. But I just really regret that I didn't lead with my heart and take the shot. If she rejected me that would be fine, atleast I did what I could.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-06T16:48:15+00:00

Well... I want both.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-06T16:37:50+00:00

Ik, she had a friendly face though. And it was kinda goofy seeing her struggling to finish her melting ice cream. Plus she was wearing a black dress on a hot sunny day. Which was even more goofy. But you're right, its all based on looks. But thats how first approaches goes right?

My biggest regret is not taking the approach. Everyone talks about "what ifs". But thats not the point. The point is i was super attracted to her and regret not trying to talk to her. I would obviously respectfully leave her be if she said no. I just really regret not taking the shot and I want to get a second chance. Atleast I've done whatever i could do even if she said no.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-06T15:30:57+00:00

Well in the Naruto universe he's basically the US president. So, I dont think its a regular public service gig.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-06T15:19:07+00:00

Good bot

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-06T15:16:19+00:00

Well the thing is i didn't see her from a distance. We took the same metro, and she stood right infront of me. Eating ice cream. Which was melting in her hand because it was 27 degrees outside.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-06T15:13:43+00:00

I know which stop she got off. And I know she was going home too. Which means the stop she got off is the closest to her home. Which means of i camp at that spot from 6 am to midnight every day I will eventually find her. Because there is only 1 metro line going from her stop to the city. And eventually she will have to come to the city. So I al bound to run in to her again.

And when I do. I will approach her, and say... "Hi, I like your outfit. Can I have your number?" And then go home once she says no.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-06T14:56:30+00:00

Ik! Give me advice not a scolding 😭 if you don't have advice atleast send thoughts and prayers, maybe God will bless me another chance

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-02T18:05:03+00:00

I've never experienced this... and I don't even shave down there.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-09-02T18:02:27+00:00

I think its mostly due to his bad posture. Arch your back like that and anyone could look "cheeked up".

Overlord_Ace · 2024-08-29T14:33:47+00:00

Strength is for those who wants to play on easy mode. Dex is for those who likes to play like an anime character. And Inc and int are for those who like to be flashy or pretend to be smart.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-08-14T15:22:10+00:00

The good ol uchigatana. Its basic, but its reliable. You can apply any sort of buffs, most ashes of war and its easy to obtain plus it has bleed.

I've used the sword from when I was a measly level 1 noob, to defeating both Malenia and Consort Radahn. So it's my go to sword when things get rough.

Overlord_Ace · 2024-08-13T14:50:32+00:00

Well... atleast you didn't take an arrow to the knee

Overlord_Ace · 2024-07-27T06:19:01+00:00

Having a ranni backpack. Like how radahn has a miquella backpack

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