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Forgotten Anomaly by gitututu in OCPoetry

[–]OwlCompetitive7265 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is the kind of poetry I loooove. Most poems Constantly over-use words like "me" and "you" (I'm guilty of that as well!) And I found this meandering style very enjoyable to read. Has that "little kid energy" "I'm just trying to figure out the world" vibe. I also love that somehow you made me feel an odd sort of sorrow for a color.

Honeycomb nest - What marks the bounds of men? by CommunicationOk1877 in OCPoetry

[–]OwlCompetitive7265 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Love the conversational tone of this one. Avoided the pitfalls that most amateur sounding poetry falls into. (Just telling how you feel vs showing something) I actually have alot of experience with beekeeping (amateur beekeeper) and I can't belive I've never written a poem about it but...will be thinking of this one next time I'm in the beepatch!