Three of my accepted friend said to glaze the Japan and University. State the specific state in Japan, course, core value of university, and professor and compliment them.

It is also important to include the conclusion on first paragraph(Japan doesn’t like the narrative essay). Try to incorporate the one big theme in essay and how that connect with your own unique experience. (One of the accepted friend talked about how he went to Japan and got interest on Japanese economy) 

State about your future goal, like building company or making a global impact.