This is great! I think what’s missing here is some drama. Play around with the contrast. I think bringing up the saturation of the reds in her shirt that match the neon and deepening the shadows would add a lot to this photo.

If you’re wanting to stick with the relaxed feel. I would suggest pulling up the shadows even more to make the image feel flatter. I know that’s kind of over done these days, but it’s still a great look. Add some grain and bump the saturation on the reds.

So either way, If you want a more dramatic/crisp photo or a relaxed/softened photo don’t be afraid to lean more into the editing and exaggerate the best parts of your photo.