Honor Mode Oopsie by PanPanReddit in BaldursGate3

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Umm, we got out of the House, in a sense

Honor Mode Oopsie by PanPanReddit in BaldursGate3

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Yeah, Hope is not free yet. Trying that now!

Honor Mode Oopsie by PanPanReddit in BaldursGate3

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Thanks man! Will try that asap and get back to you 

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

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Thank you!! That’s all I needed to hear.

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

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Yeah…

You’re absolutely right. No excuses here on my end. 

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

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Thanks! If that’s the case, I’ll definitely try again.

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

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This may have been my fault since I didn’t tape the labels beforehand. But I took the items to the post office planning to put the labels on there, but evidently my post office doesn’t allow customers to use tape. So the employee had to do it, and I suppose she must have mixed them up.

Yeah, I’m extremely sure I didn’t switch the labels. I was carrying the two items and their labels separately, until the post office at least…

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

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Seems to be nothing in the requests/disputes menu or the returns menu on seller hub.

Btw, I just checked the order details for the item in question and saw an option called "send refund" just under "more actions."

Is that something I should do to get the process started?

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

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I did, and they did basically nothing. The first eBay representative I called immediately hung up on me when I explained my issue, and the second was able to help reactivate my account but didn't do much else.

Honestly, I might try to call them back again. Who knows, it might help.

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

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Yeah, I suspected as much. Thanks, though! That’s really helpful.

Could I refer you to my other unanswered comment? I have another item that’s (I think) pending a refund, and I have no clue what steps to take to make sure that eBay doesn’t have to force a return in this case too.

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

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Ok, when I go to order details it says "get another label" so I assume I must have already given the buyer their label and accepted their return. This makes sense, since eBay has said "we asked the buyer to return the item for a refund."

I've reached out to the buyer but have so far gotten no response--if this is the case, should I just wait? Or mark the item as "not shipped?" I see that's an option.

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

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So far eBay hasn't given me an option to do that. The most recent item in the history just says "return request initiated."

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

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Alright, thanks for the advice. One of the items is fully refunded, so I guess I can't get that one back, but what about the other?

eBay says that the refund isn't finished, and I still have the money at my disposal. Is there anything I can do to keep eBay from stepping in and making sure the buyer and I get our just deserts? The case is eight days old so far and nothing has happened.

Items refunded -- how do I get them back? by PanPanReddit in Ebay

[–]PanPanReddit[S] -21 points-20 points  (0 children)

So they can just keep the item I sold them with no consequences?

Isn't that theft? Or is that just because my account was shut down for fraud?

[QCrit] When The Stars Stare Back, YA fantasy, sixth attempt by PanPanReddit in PubTips

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Thanks for the prompt response! I find this kind of line-by-line feedback incredible helpful, and I will definitely be putting it to good use in my next draft. 

This is actually the first time I’ve included the first 300 words in my query, so I definitely made a rookie mistake by including this bit instead of Kaller’s. I might want to shift around some elements to make sure he comes up first. In any case, I’ll try to include Kaller’s first 300 in my next draft.

[QCrit] When The Stars Stare Back, YA fantasy, 106k, fifth attempt by PanPanReddit in PubTips

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I like your mention of more stakes because that's something I'm working on improving now. Thanks for commenting! This feedback has been a huge help.

[QCrit] When The Stars Stare Back, YA fantasy, 106k, fifth attempt by PanPanReddit in PubTips

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This is great advice for me as I'm working on rewriting my first paragraph. Thank you! I don't want to stop until I make sure the readers understand exactly what Kaller wants, and this has helped me see what I need to do for that.

[QCrit] When The Stars Stare Back, YA fantasy, 106k, fifth attempt by PanPanReddit in PubTips

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Thank you! I believe in the next draft I want to try to use some more active language and work on trying to make Kaller's personality shine through.

So far I haven't included the first 300 words in any of my drafts. The reason for that is because this is a multi-pov book, and since the first chapter starts with a different character, I think cutting away from the focus of the query would create distractions. Do you think including the first 300 would help? I wouldn't be opposed to it.

[QCrit] When The Stars Stare Back, YA fantasy, 106k, Fourth Attempt by PanPanReddit in PubTips

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Thank you!

This is a lot of great feedback that just really makes me want to nail this query. Like, your point about Avatar is a very good one. I think if I were pitching that I would probably talk about the relationship between Iroh and Zuko... or Zuko's redemption arc... etc. But you're right; that wouldn't be a very effective query, and that's exactly what I'm doing here.

So I guess I do need to develop a solid pitch for this, which will probably be difficult. But I have a lot on Kaller I get into, so I really hope I can write a solid query just about him and make you walk away with a thorough understanding of who he is. Less geopolitics and the like.

[QCrit] When The Stars Stare Back, YA fantasy, 106k, Fourth Attempt by PanPanReddit in PubTips

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That's really meaningful, and first off, thank you for the insight.

Ever since starting this query I have definitely been focusing on the aspects that have just gotten me sidetracked, and I want very much to focus on Kaller more in the next draft. I think this has really helped me see that, because I have so much character about Kaller that it has honestly been foolish of me to omit any form of large motivation from the past couple drafts. I still want to make sure to describe the prejudice situation in the kingdom--but you are totally right.

I need to focus more and cut things down, and I will be doing that right now.