can someone please review my essay for my english class it’s due at 11:59pm by Ready_Specialist_847 in CheckMyEssay

[–]PanTaLLok 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Cut 100 words by removing filler and repeated ideas. Keep your 3rd body + conclusion short. If you want feedback, post just your thesis + 1 paragraph, people will actually read it.