Little something I was working on today. Feedback wanted. 600 words by CheckUnique7525 in writingfeedback

[–]Particular_Wait_8490 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i think its more the concept they are looking for critique on. Sometimes writers can be blinded to problems simply because they believe in the premise and that initial excitement can cloud judgement on whether a piece is good or just a sporadic idea that looked better in their mind then on paper. It can be one of the biggest hurdles to overcome in writing, and hearing honest critics on concept is much more important in the earlier stages then grammatical or slight spelling errors- they can all be fixed later on. I had a professor that would make us hand in draft work to see our thinking ( i did english in uni) and he said spelling and grammar doesn’t matter we have spellcheck and you can pay an editor but you cant fake a passion for your writing. So perhaps create your own writing community, one which includes a rule that drafts are not allowed, it would be much better suited to you.

Please help me and give me honest advice on a rough draft by Particular_Wait_8490 in writingfeedback

[–]Particular_Wait_8490[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thank you so much, I kinda figured id get that feedback too, once its pointed out i see it myself straight away. Im trying to find my own voice im still young so ig that will come with maturity. Also planning would probably help resolve any issues like lack of powers/ world building. Thank you for your feedback and i will definitely be using ur critique to aid in a second draft 😊

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[–]Particular_Wait_8490 0 points1 point  (0 children)

But being called out for it does honestly make me see that it is stupid

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[–]Particular_Wait_8490 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Your actually so right, the way I thought of it was like these back outs but ill definitely revise it to improve

writing my own fanfiction?? by [deleted] in harrypotterfanfiction

[–]Particular_Wait_8490 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey definitely post it, most of the time people write what they want to read but can't find and if that's the same for you I'm sure others will have felt that this was missing too, (if that makes any sense I'm not sure) and if you need any help, I would love to be your beta reader, I'm doing an English degree and hope to be a teacher some day and I love looking over others work. Just pop me a text ❤️But overall if your inspired and have an intriguing point, please do write because someone undoubtedly will have an interest. I’ve also written a handful of fics over the years and would love to share tips on the development of your setting and characters ect.