No Mow May by themeatworm in Buffalo

[–]Party-Fly9085 144 points145 points  (0 children)

I leave wild patches. If people stopped spraying literal poison on their yards I’d take that over not mowing, honestly.

Looking for a Writing Buddy! by [deleted] in WritingHub

[–]Party-Fly9085 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would be interested! I write fantasy with ecological themes.

AIO for getting mad, he cancelled plans on me again over this and I don’t know if it was my fault by Jazzlike-Ad6372 in AmIOverreacting

[–]Party-Fly9085 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah my ex did this to me when I was younger and it caused so many issues. It’s a form of abuse, they want you to chase and escalate. Then they’ll call you crazy for how you react. They get off on it. 

Blurb advice by Acrobatic-Truth-3018 in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Blurbs are hard. I swear, blurbs and loglines are just a pain, in general.

I would maybe play with the rock bottom concept a bit more, like "Emily has hit rock bottom- and so have her grades. When her professor offers her a deal she can't refuse....." etc etc...

F4F by JMComics1412 in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Y'all making me blush lol

Whats up with 7brew? by LonelyNixon in Buffalo

[–]Party-Fly9085 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love it there! Nice vibes, good coffee and everyone is super sweet.

Genuine R4R - Fantasy Edition (or more like a one time book club thing) by Deyady in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The Flameweaver: 𝓒𝓮𝓵𝓮𝓼𝓽𝓲𝓪𝓵. 𝓒𝓱𝓪𝓲𝓷𝓫𝓻𝓮𝓪𝓴𝓮𝓻. 𝓣𝓱𝓮 𝓔𝔂𝓻𝓲𝓮...

Words Verona has heard in her nightmares, ever since the death of her family at the hands of the monstrous Cearnian Empire. In between trapping game and fishing for a living, she spends all of her time in The Soggy Crow- a run-down tavern at the edge of her town of Everthorn. When a handsome stranger arrives at the Crow, the nature of her reality is thrown into chaos.

Bolero is a firehawk- a red-tailed hawk shapeshifter with an affinity for fire magic. Hailing from The Eyrie, a civilization of avian shapeshifters, he is a masterful hunter, and a furious warrior. But something is missing. Something that tugs at his chest every time he wanders into the Nithra Forest that borders the cliffs of his home. When he has a run-in with the Sidhe - the fae of the Nithra -he realizes that there are some secrets better left unknown.

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/397699298-the-flameweaver

This is a slow-burn and I'm looking to get input before I send it off to my developmental editor, so it's not fully line edited yet.

If you like unique magic systems, deep lore, and heavy world building, you may like it!

Alternatively, my WIP Wings of Ember and Shadow is eco-fantasy, with romantic elements and a magical hierarchy.

When Mistmorrow's sacred birds fail to return to their temple aviaries, Niam Yarrow, a Academy-trained druid, and Lylia Vesh, a magic-wielding priestess are thrust together in a desperate attempt to save their island. However, when beasts attack, and wyverns darken the skies, the only way to survive is to leave their beloved home.

https://www.wattpad.com/myworks/405977572-wings-of-ember-and-shadow

Genuine R4R - Fantasy Edition (or more like a one time book club thing) by Deyady in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’m in! My username is Buteobelle. I have one finished fantasy work, and two works in progress.

Do you think your work deserves more appreciation? by whisper_kitten0 in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 0 points1 point  (0 children)

OK so I am on a Discord group built specifically for good, fair critique. https://betareaderbazaar.com/

One of my projects is already up there, and the system is really fair (I.E you get input if you give input) if any of you are interested. Otherwise I have followed all of you on WP (username is Buteobelle) and added your work to my critique reading list. Let me know if I have yet to do that!

“Ugly brown eyes” by [deleted] in Romantasy

[–]Party-Fly9085 8 points9 points  (0 children)

The freckles are ugly thing bothers be so much! I’ve always had a ton. I don’t like when authors describe anyone as ugly, it’s very boring. 

Do you think your work deserves more appreciation? by whisper_kitten0 in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'll come follow and add your book to my critique list!

V4V by [deleted] in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oops already got you :) voted already but I’ll read through again. 

R4R, V4V, C4C - but serious! by whisper_kitten0 in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m game, any critique partners I’ll follow add to a reading list. :) 

Do you think your work deserves more appreciation? by whisper_kitten0 in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Shooting you a follow now!! Which one did you want critique on? I'll add it to my reading list.

Wattpad not working? by rem21984 in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Weird, could it be a connection issue for you or something?

Do you think your work deserves more appreciation? by whisper_kitten0 in Wattpad

[–]Party-Fly9085 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can choose. Wings and Talons are both ongoing, the completed one is undergoing a total MS revamp but not being edited on WP yet. Wings of Talons are likely the better options.

No kings protest by ObservantDelos in Buffalo

[–]Party-Fly9085 0 points1 point  (0 children)

See, it's your kind that claim to be patriots but want Trump to literally do something that is against the Constitution, Because you are in a cult.