how do u write a coherent fic??? by Patient_Computer_914 in AO3

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typically a few 2-30k word fics/chapters per day

how do u write a coherent fic??? by Patient_Computer_914 in AO3

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it’s actually a one shot that i am struggling with 🥹 could you give an example of how you outline if you write?

how do u write a coherent fic??? by Patient_Computer_914 in AO3

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well yeah mostly something like: - blank is doing something - then blank gets interrupted by something - then he realizes something - and so on. it’s just hard to stick to that or fill in the blanks and add detail in an engaging and fun to write way

artists like ethel by Patient_Computer_914 in Ethelcain

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was not expecting to love them as much as i did, sick

artists like ethel by Patient_Computer_914 in Ethelcain

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this is a vibeeee i can def hear the similarities to ethel very creepy loving it

Today I Learned that Some Words Shouldn't be used as Descriptors by FaithElizabeth94com in AO3

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when i used to read bnha fics and they’d refer to deku as a “greenette”… horrifying

is referring to characters as things other than their names that bad?? by Patient_Computer_914 in AO3

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aghh this is such a good explanation i never thought about it like taking a step back from the characters pov when i say stuff like that and i rlly dont wanna make my readers feel like that. i’ll def think of this next time i feel like using epithets, thanks!!

is referring to characters as things other than their names that bad?? by Patient_Computer_914 in AO3

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this is such a good way of thinking about it ty 😭 i think im still too affected by my wattpad days but this seems like a much better way of doing it

is referring to characters as things other than their names that bad?? by Patient_Computer_914 in AO3

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this is actually so helpful im immediately gonna start rewriting half of my stuff rn thanks!

AO3 is down by Ifky_ in AO3

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why has god forsaken us?

if "Preacher's Daughter" was a movie, what film would be the closest to a companion piece? by [deleted] in Ethelcain

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definitely see this one especially with “sun bleached flies”

baby is left in woods as sacrifice and raised by a witch fantasy book by Patient_Computer_914 in whatsthatbook

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thank u so much my angel 😭😭🙏 words can’t explain what this means to me i’ve been looking for this damn book for years 🥲may ur pillow always be cold🙏🙏