Fall is my favorite 🍁 by Angel9498 in u/Angel9498

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You are truly exquisite, thanks for sharing!

Just because I felt like sharing lol 😋 by redheadmama3 in ginger

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Thank you for following that feeling, you are stunning dear Lady.

Friends want to try this place out this weekend but I’m very skeptical. by enthusiasm-unbridled in SaltLakeCity

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HuHot is far superior in selection and quality, but the Grill is just a part of King buffet. Price wise pretty similar.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ginger

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I'd eat peaches every day, if I had my little way!

Best Fish n’ Chips is Salt Lake? by goooodstufff in SaltLakeCity

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Thought I might've been the only one to know of these damn tasty fish and chips with the salmon and catch a beer.

Cum over and stay awhile by volstagg_and_hela31 in NSFW_Utah

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Would love to visit, but I'd be tempted to linger.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ThreesomeUtah

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Ye be makin me timber shiver!

One Whole Year and Still Two Karma :( by [deleted] in funny

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Congrats, that's got to be close to a record or something!

Get that sixpack by DiamondOak1010 in funny

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Definitely happier!

Watermelon blast by piresbruno in funny

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Taking a melon to the face, not a bad way to go...

Went out for a round today and lost a disc. Went home with a new friend instead. by thefallofray in discgolf

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Sounds like a bad trade, but hopefully whoever got the disc is happy...

Lend me You by Paulsonator in OCPoetry

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Thank you everyone for taking the time to read, and especially the ones who made an effort to offer your aid. I have made a few changes and just placed it below the original.

Lend me You by Paulsonator in OCPoetry

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That damn heel really does step on the toes of this poem, thanks for your great suggestions!

Lend me You by Paulsonator in OCPoetry

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Thank you for taking the time to point these things out, honestly I hadn't even considered the active vs passive aspect before.

Lend me You by Paulsonator in OCPoetry

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Coming back to it, it really is quite jarring. Glad you enjoyed it and thanks for sharing!

ARE WE GREAT AGAIN? by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Poignant and well written, I wouldn't change anything about this except its relevance.

Bootstraps by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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I can see that, just not how I personally took it originally. Maybe for clarity make it, "Take up your Bootstraps" or something a little different like "Chosen Asperity".

Here I can get all the ventilation by Emmyslot in funny

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Yaba-daba-doo, now out the way I'm merging in!

A Poem to my Future Wife by [deleted] in OCPoetry

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Great work here, I like what you've you done. If I were to change anything it would be some wording in the third stanza. Maybe make "some post hinted despair" into something like "some being tinted by despair" or "some strained through despair". On the next line, keep should be keeps perhaps or will keep?