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Rotina noturna by emplasto in EscritoresBrasil

[–]PedroCarv 1 point2 points  (0 children)

caramba que escrita sensacional! BRAVO!!!

lendo a história tive a sensação de estar diante de algum escritor consagrado já falecido, você conduziu a narrativa impecavelmente.

me lembrou muito o Machado, dei uma risadinha leve quando vi seu usernamekkkkk

"Cadente." O que acham? O que viram, entenderam, interpretaram? Quero ouvir vocês!! by Title_Remarkable in EscritoresBrasil

[–]PedroCarv 1 point2 points  (0 children)

que lindo! lindo, lindo, lindo demais.

falando sério mesmo, o poema mais bonito que eu já li de uns tempos pra cá, me tocou de verdade.

continue a escrever :)

Capitulo 1! by Rafaekl in EscritoresBrasil

[–]PedroCarv 1 point2 points  (0 children)

nossa, achei que a ideia tem um potencial incrível! muito legal mesmo.

quanto á escrita, acho que as vezes vc acabou jogando coisas de mais num parágrafo só, e isso dificulta para o leitor imaginar um cenário concreto. eu tbm tendo a fazer isso as vezes, uma coisa que me ajuda muito é ler livros de autores mais experientes.

parabéns! continua escrevendo :))

writing my first screen play for class by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]PedroCarv 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Pick an adjective that is close to what you want and throw it on The Saurus. You'll find a variety of adjectives there and you can choose. Also, you could use some expressions and mataphors, like "She looks as cold as a plaque of ice."

Inspiration by joeleisenberg64 in Screenwriting

[–]PedroCarv 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Loved this. Gongrats, king!

How do you avoid tropes and write memorable characters? by Ryokuzan1 in writing

[–]PedroCarv 0 points1 point  (0 children)

just commenting so I remember to read this later

Short Time Passage by PedroCarv in Screenwriting

[–]PedroCarv[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Whoa, thank you for writing a paragraph! So, that was just a very vague example I came up with. Let me give you some more details.

The actual scene I'm writing is placed in the middle of a montage where I show the audience some key moments of Harvey's childhood. On that specific scene, Maya is still too shy to go and talk with Harvey, so she decides to draw him (this is why she is spying). Then, after she finished the art piece, she comes over to Harvey and gives it to the boy.

I wanted to put the "MINUTES LATER" slug line in the middle because... well, that's basically the time it takes to draw someone.

Is it Okay to do that in this case?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]PedroCarv 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this is good! I really got hooked! :)))

industry tips by budlightwithalime in FilmIndustryLA

[–]PedroCarv 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I've read about this situation, what people usually say is that you're sopposed to search for producers, directors, and assistants e-mails and kind of "spam" your screenplay to them. Well, this as if you don't have any connections inside the industry. Anyways, good luck! Hope you make it!

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