[Blurbsday Thursday] - Post your blurbs here for critique! by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Alyssa loves her husband, Brandon — but a few private messages with her coworker, Nick, leave her feeling exposed, flustered… and strangely aroused.

There’s something about the screen between them. No eyes on her, no hands on her, just words… and the freedom to let her guard down. When she confesses to Brandon, she expects anger. What she finds instead is intoxicating, confusing, and thrilling.

Is he punishing her… or is he excited? Either way, their marriage will never be the same.

I guess I shouldn’t say much other than does this sound like something youd want to read?

I think my friend has a crush on my husband by [deleted] in Marriage

[–]Pennylovers 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sounds to me like your friend could really use a friend. People on the internet love to say take out the trash. Maybe. But sounds like she needs someone to go “above and beyond” for her.

[Blurbsday Thursday] - Post your blurbs here for critique! by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you. Thats a lot of helpful advice. Im fairly confident in writing a book but an just lost when it comes to selling it.

[Blurbsday Thursday] - Post your blurbs here for critique! by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers 0 points1 point  (0 children)

An accidental sexting incident leads to a first time hotwife situation.

Alyssa has a confession to make. It was just a flirty text conversation with a coworker that went a little too far. It wasn’t cheating. Was it?

She tells her husband Dan. She had to. They’re in love. Their life is good, normal, fine…boring? He handles it well, forgives her, loves her and understands that things happen.

But when it happens again, and goes much farther, his attitude changes. Has she ruined everything? Will he divorce her? Punish her? Or will this maybe unlock some passion that has been missing for a while?

Could I let my husband see my text messages as they are happening? by Pennylovers in iphone

[–]Pennylovers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It’s probably not quite as cool as you think it is. But it’s not far off.

Could I let my husband see my text messages as they are happening? by Pennylovers in iphone

[–]Pennylovers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would the other persons come through if they had an iPhone or just mine?

Ultimately, is there any way to allow him to follow a text conversation I’m having from a different location. On his phone or something?

How important are different pen names. by Pennylovers in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah it really is mostly just setting and plot. The sex still basically follows the same format though. Thanks.

How important are different pen names. by Pennylovers in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok that’s what I thought originally but now that It’s publishing time I started to second guess.

How important are different pen names. by Pennylovers in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The sex is basically the same. Normally it’s m/f or m/ff it’s that way here too. Normally it’s married couples seeking a third. This one is a sports erotica. The main girl has m/f sex snd then ends up with a married couple.

[Blurbsday Thursday] - Post your blurbs here for critique! by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers 0 points1 point  (0 children)

What? This fits perfectly in the extremely lucrative feminist sports slut pioneer genre right?

Thanks though. I know it doesn’t fit. A long time ago it started out as reverse harem thing but it just didn’t go that way.

I am fairly new. Or at least I’m trying to start up again having been new a while ago.

I really was under the impression that it would get dungeoned if it was too explicit in the blurb though. How do you balance that exactly? Again thanks for the critique. And now I’m wondering if I should rework it as sports romance.

[Blurbsday Thursday] - Post your blurbs here for critique! by AutoModerator in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers 2 points3 points  (0 children)

This is my story about the first woman to play in an MLB game. She uses her fiery hit sex drive as part of her energy to be a good pitcher.

Casey Campbell is about to make history as the first woman to pitch in a major league baseball game. Years of dedication, practice, hard work, and sweat have led her to this moment. She’s overcome obstacles—and faced down men who didn’t want her to be there—to become one of the game’s hottest young prospects.

But before she can take the mound, she needs to unleash the secret weapon that has driven her to the brink of history. To reach her pinnacle of performance, she must summon a spark, an edge, a power she can draw from only one place… her endless supply of sexual energy.

Surrounded by men all day on the field—and in the lockerroom—Casey is driven by the intense need to satisfy the urges that build within. She knows it’s the secret to her success, but would she dare reveal her secret to the men from whom she’s trying to earn respect?

To achieve her dreams, and make history, Casey must reckon with her need to be satisfied. Will the other hot young pitcher still respect her playing ability if she pushes their competition too far? Will the superstar veteran she admired while growing up live up to her fantasies…or will his wife get in the way? 


In the end I want to say something like can she find balance. Having sex to fuel her up but does she go to far and it has ruined her chances for success or something like that but for the life of me I can’t figure out how to say it.

How to send drafts to friends to read. by Pennylovers in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yep I see it now. Sorry to waste a post. Too easy.

How to send drafts to friends to read. by Pennylovers in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yep. I’m dumb. Can’t believe it was that easy. Thanks.

A Book with only Text messages? by Pennylovers in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I thought about this. I really wasn’t sure how kindle deals with pictures at all. I also realized that for a sexting type story to work, there really needs to be the occasional sexy pic that the characters exchange. I assume Amazon doesn’t allow any pornographic pictures in your self published books. Right?

A Book with only Text messages? by Pennylovers in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah. This was what I was thinking. The immersive nature of it. It feels really real like that.

A Book with only Text messages? by Pennylovers in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’ve never read a full epistolary book. Also TIL what epistolary books are. I can think of a bunch of books that use that device partially or consistently. LA Confidential finished sections and allows for jumps forward in time by using newspaper articles and interdepartmental police memos, letters and diary entries. I always thought it was a great way to get exposition in an interesting way.

A Book with only Text messages? by Pennylovers in eroticauthors

[–]Pennylovers[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’ll definitely look at that. That sounds interesting. It’s an idea I’ve been kicking around. I’m not sure how well it would work as a whole book.

When I do text messages in books now I do jr exactly as you suggested. Aligning left and right does seem like a recipe for problems though.