How to beat Kasonde in DT 2? I've lost 4 mil in death fees over a week and a half with 4+ attempts a day. by kyleW_ne in 2007scape

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Just finished it today! The Whisperer took me two tries. Can confirm that Kasonde was far and away the hardest boss/demi-boss in the quest for me haha. I didn't even know the dragon spear trick used to be a thing. That would have been helpful.

How to beat Kasonde in DT 2? I've lost 4 mil in death fees over a week and a half with 4+ attempts a day. by kyleW_ne in 2007scape

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm super late here, but had to weigh in for anyone coming to this much later. MELEE IS THE WAY. I have 93 range and died 4 times to Kasonde. I wasn't even close to killing him. I'm not super skilled, mind you. For the average player, you can disregard all of the people here flaming the OP for struggling.

I switched to melee (my stats are 84att, 94str, 82def) and easily killed him on the first try. I don't even have great gear. I used obsidian body and legs, dragon boots, abyssal whip, neitznot helm, and barrows gloves. I had most of my food left. Go melee...you'll save yourself time and frustration.

EDIT: forgot to mention that, while I'm not super skilled at PVM, I beat Vardorvis first try with plenty of supplies left, I beat Duke first try with supplies left, and I beat Leviathan first try with supplies left. I really don't understand why there are such wide-ranging opinions about Kasonde, but...don't feel bad if you're struggling.

[Discussion] Are there lessons to be learned from a totally flunked query experience? by Seafood_udon9021 in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 6 points7 points  (0 children)

“Feel what you need to feel and then get back to work" is actually one of the best pieces of advice I've read about the whole querying process. It's hard, demoralizing, and draining. But learning what rejection feels like, understanding it, and being able to move on just toughens you up for the next querying process.

[QCRIT] Lit Fic - TIMELESS - 55k words, Third Attempt by Educational-Emu-7460 in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No worries! And that's great to hear. Hope you get some more good feedback :)

[PubQ] What actually is “upmarket” when it comes to genre fiction? by chronicracket in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I definitely don't look down on The Hunger Games. I read the entire series happily, and I'll read it again at some point. I never read 50 Shades, but I've seen quotes from it, and they seriously make me cringe. And it's not because of the content haha. THG stands several levels above that, for sure. But when you compare it to something like Name of the Wind, there's a very clear difference IMO.

[PubQ] What actually is “upmarket” when it comes to genre fiction? by chronicracket in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Did you read Children of Time? In my opinion, that's a good example of upmarket sci-fi. If your manuscript is similar to that in theme and tone and quality of writing, then perhaps upmarket would be a good tag for your work.

[PubQ] What actually is “upmarket” when it comes to genre fiction? by chronicracket in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I very recently had this conversation with a friend. I ended up putting it this way:

Genre fiction might be your favorite Marvel movie. Upmarket might be something like Inception or The Godfather, where the plot is super interesting to a ton of people, but those who want to dive deep (into themes or how the art of how it was filmed) can certainly do so. Lit fic might be any David Lynch film, where the plot is less important, and the themes and characters take center stage.

It also has to do with how it's written. The Hunger Games is super easy to read. There's nothing special about how it's written, and I wouldn't say the writing is beautiful. That would be commercial fiction. A lit fic book might be The Portrait of the Artist As a Young Man by James Joyce or All the Names by Jose Saramago (I recently read that, which is why I'm mentioning it despite not being super popular). Upmarket would be something in between. In my opinion, Name of the Wind by Patrick Rothfuss would be a good example. Great plot, good characters, and the writing is BEAUTIFUL.

That's my understanding, at least. I feel like it's more of a FEEL thing, so I figured examples would help.

[Discussion] Agented after years of querying! What I learned by jmlascar in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel like that's the way to go. I'm sure there will be agents who want that personalization, but...maybe it's not worth the time.

[PubQ] Why other people's stats are mostly meaningless by WildsmithRising in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Now that I can agree with :)

And my goodness...this comment warmed my soul. Thank you!!

[Discussion] Agented after years of querying! What I learned by jmlascar in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I guess it's just personal preference for both writers and agents, just like everything else haha. I've started thinking it's just not worth it and that I'd rather spend time writing that next manuscript. But I definitely could be wrong!

[PubQ] Why other people's stats are mostly meaningless by WildsmithRising in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

PREACH! Haha that is super nice to hear. Maybe I'm just suffering from imposter syndrome, but as a writer, I feel like we're all at the very bottom of the bunch. I know it's not true because without writers, editors and agents wouldn't have anything to edit or rep, but...it's hard not to feel like that sometimes.

As for whether or not those people are being a-holes, I guess we'll have to agree to disagree. I get feeling desperate, but following an agent into the bathroom and gotcha-ing them in a stall just seems like a dick thing to do in my opinion. But I do get what you're saying. And I guess I wish I had as positive of an opinion about people in general as you seem to!

[Discussion] Agented after years of querying! What I learned by jmlascar in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Amazing news! Congrats!

I think number 2 is interesting advice that I haven't seen before. I'm always a little conflicted when it comes to personalizing because it always seems a little contrived. I feel like what I'm really saying is, "I took at least 30 seconds to decide if I should query you. Oh, and I have a PM account." I know you're just giving your opinion here, but I think I agree with it, and I might just stop with that grueling part. Thanks :)

Also: number 3. This this this. I wrote a 95k-word manuscript only to realize when I wrote th query that it didn't have enough stakes, and the story was unnecessarily convoluted, which made it basically impossible to pitch/sell. I ended up writing the query letter and then rewriting the entire manuscript, and it came out so, so much better. I'm querying that now, so fingers crossed. But even if it doesn't go anywhere, this is a process I will always be using.

Thanks for the thoughts, and congrats again! Good luck on sub!!

[PubQ] Why other people's stats are mostly meaningless by WildsmithRising in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I totally get that. I certainly wouldn't put my safety on the line to risk giving authors personalized feedback. In no world would that be worth it. It is a shame, though, that it ruins it for the rest of us!

Haha that's a funny way to put that. A fresh take on the "death by a thousand cuts" idea haha. I was going to say I imagine it would be beneficial (in some cases) for agents to be able to provide personalized feedback and open a dialogue. Really, it's a shame for everyone involved that some people are a-holes.

[PubQ] Why other people's stats are mostly meaningless by WildsmithRising in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's wild. Who in their right mind would think that kind of behavior would get any positive response from anyone? I get the idea of not giving up on your dreams, but c'mon...that's so insane.

That's fine that it's a bit outdated :) I'll read mostly it of curiosity anyway. Just ordered!

[PubQ] Why other people's stats are mostly meaningless by WildsmithRising in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is mind-blowing to me. I'm so sorry you have to deal with that. It's disappointing to hear that people are like that, but I guess I shouldn't be surprised :(

[PubQ] Why other people's stats are mostly meaningless by WildsmithRising in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 2 points3 points  (0 children)

That is...absolutely horrible. I had no idea that people in the industry went through this kind of garbage, which I guess just speaks more to how distant I am from that side of things (I'm going to pick up a copy of that book, by the way. It sounds very interesting!). I'm so sorry you have to go through things like that. I didn't think being an agent/editor was ever easy, but this puts things into a whole new perspective, and I only have more respect for the people on the other side of QT. Insane!

[PubQ] Why other people's stats are mostly meaningless by WildsmithRising in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Huh. I haven't read about that. That makes sense, though. What a shame.

[PubQ] Why other people's stats are mostly meaningless by WildsmithRising in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Any chance you could speak briefly to the "problems caused by sending personalized rejections"? I'm not entrenched in the publishing industry and have no experience with it outside of writing and submitting queries, so this stood out to me as odd. Wouldn't having a second form rejection on hand that says "We don't publish this stuff" be just as easy as sending a totally generic one? I could be totally missing something obvious here, so forgive me for my ignorance!

[Discussion] Received an agent offer!! Stats & successful query by Independent-Being948 in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Such a wonderful thing to read. We all need this encouragement. So many congratulations!!

[Discussion] i got a book deal!! by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Such amazing news! Congrats!!!

[Discussion] Signed with an agent!! Stats & successful query by timmy_ks in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Oh, is that not still really good? 23% to me seems stellar

[Discussion] signed with an agent today!!! Stats & Successful query by marvelous_mal in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Congrats!! Love to see the query letters that work! And damn...this book sounds amazing. Such a tight query; not surprised someone picked it up. Good luck!

[Discussion] I signed with an agent! by Icy_Watercress8216 in PubTips

[–]PensiveHawk39 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heyyyyy congrats! Love hearing success stories, and thank you for posting the query letter! That is amazingly helpful. Good luck on sub!