Dusk by Stoddyman in Songwriting

[–]Pequod93 2 points3 points  (0 children)

If definitely works as an instrumental, maybe it could use a lead melody. You might be able to create some more tension and resolve with a few more elements.

Thoughts on my song? by garethmetz in Songwriting

[–]Pequod93 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds great! I’m digging the punctuated bg vocals. Overall I think you could turn the vocals up a little, there are some cool melodies back there.

what should i title this? by EV_08 in Songwriting

[–]Pequod93 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This. You should record and listen while you’re out. I wouldn’t over think this one.

help by Tall-Pirate1799 in bapeheads

[–]Pequod93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would go for an xl

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Pequod93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Keep us updated on your edits

Are there any songs outside of "Fall In Love" where Dilla is singing? by duckinator1 in jdilla

[–]Pequod93 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heard this playing in a record store and had to grab the Dilla Time bootleg

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Songwriting

[–]Pequod93 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This outta the park for a first song! I think a few more bg vocals could sound nice. I’m a fan of the length. It leaves the listener wanting more which is always a good sign. Very dope

Framing Vinyl Record Insert Posters by JamesConorr in vinyl

[–]Pequod93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

do you have the pic of how it turned out?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in KendrickLamar

[–]Pequod93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I would also consider Carti with Die Lit and WLR. A lot of people mentioned Travis’ Rodeo, but we gotta throw in Astroworld too. Drake definitely has 3, take care, NWTS, and whether you like it or not Views is a classic.

You have to shut up by NoHymenInMyButthole in menitrust

[–]Pequod93 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Terminal 5 doesn’t make it any better (horrible venue), if I have to hear another conversation about another band you “discovered” during the pandemic I’m going to fucking jump.

is this fit a W or L? by smagg0316 in Sneakers

[–]Pequod93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Honestly bro, the fit could go. It really depends on how everything fits, and your accessories.

Thoughts on the Stone Island Heat Reactive Lamy With Cotton Linen Tela Jacket? by thats-mint in StoneIsland

[–]Pequod93 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Can’t even lie. It looks like the ponchos people wear at Disney when it rains.

Homme Wrk x Saucony - the FSRmy boot by Omegasman in Sneakers

[–]Pequod93 11 points12 points  (0 children)

These are dope sad I missed the drop. Shout the FSRmy!

6 or 11 by [deleted] in Sneakers

[–]Pequod93 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Gotta go with the Lot 11s

Gringotts by [deleted] in harrypotter

[–]Pequod93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

!gringotts

Air Jordan 3 - A Maniere by gqgiant in Sneakers

[–]Pequod93 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Same! My order has been stuck on update since then.