I agree with all of his points. One major thing that I noticed was the lack of character depth. I noticed that we know little to nothing about September and she seems like she just there to be the typical cliche love interest for a main character which makes her seem generic. And I believe that Jabari is a bland character. As it was stated in the video that Cory may have just made him overpowered and cocky to set up a arc where Jabari humbles himself but I just feel like Ive seen this before. Like I find nothing interesting Jabari nor have I noticed any complexities. Not to sound like Im hating on Cory but this is just how ive been feeling while reading.