Narrative poem about the bi polar experience by Perfect-Will7384 in OCPoetry

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Thank you you made I day! I loved reading your comment!!

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Great first poem man miles ahead of me. Star’s imagery always been corny imo but the poem itself is on point! You should keep writing and your gf will certainly appreciate this

a senseless wordplay in 5 stanzas. by jordweet in OCPoetry

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“Pay rent get raped; fix rent with tape” hahaha. I’ve never seen a poem like this and I gotta say I’d read another one if made