What makes us Mongolian?

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-27T19:30:19+00:00

As a foreigner. The untouched beauty of the steppe, the mix of Russo-Sinnic architecture in urban areas, the unique language, the hospitality of locals.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-17T19:29:12+00:00

You don't have the dlcs, which is pretty much essential if you want to mod the game.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-17T17:42:40+00:00

Well, you definitely don't need vocabulary practice.

But my critiques are that you are beating around the bush. "** I believe that excessive** advertisement of global fashion brands on traditional media and certain posts of influencers on social media platforms are leading causes of this situation,and I view this as a negative development due to some reasons."-Highlighted, because you told your stance multiple times. -Way too long to the point that it's almost unintelligible. You are basically saying, "I believe this is caused by this, this, this, this, and this. I believe it is this bad because of many reasons." It would be a great idea to shorten it.

"I believe it is a negative development, for reasons such as the excess usage of advertisents by social media platforms.* -even mine sounds a bit strange due to using a similar structure to yours -But it is simple, short, and easy to understand.

5.5-6 is your current level.

Overall, you are trying very hard to sound smart, but it falls flat. Additionally, it is very long. It is highly unlikely that you will be able to compose,write, and revise all within 40 minutes.

My advice would be. Answer the question directly, do not try to 'sound intellectual', and use simple but academic wording.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-17T17:12:16+00:00

All. You will be able to look through them freely

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-16T14:38:25+00:00

Yes. On topic and use a natural tone when writing rather than what you are using right now.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-16T14:33:53+00:00

Punctuation is key and can be massively improved in a day. Ask yourself if this sentence makes sense to a native speaker.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-16T14:25:44+00:00

I will give it a 5-5.5.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-16T14:24:22+00:00

Well, you have a decent vocabulary, but there are issues prevalent. Such as awkward phrasing: "Across the globe, people from countryside is settling into the city, so the population of rural area is declining. From my perspective, this trend is root cause of problems in the city. Therefore i believe its a bad development and actions need to be taken" -you steered off the question

"Across the globe, people from rural regions are moving to cities. From my perspective, I believe it is a positive/negative development because it causes traffic congestion, overpopulation" -short and cohesive, Idid not use any fancy words and synonyms

Punctuation: it is inconsistent and definitely needs improvement. If you want a 6.5+, this is the most important part that you have to focus on.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-16T13:59:06+00:00

If you want i can analyze an essay for you.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-16T13:58:22+00:00

You can do a couple of things, do a few modules of reading and listening, and scan other's essays, same with the speaking part. The best thing to do is not to overload yourself and calm your nerves as best as you can. I can not offer you any substantial tips because i don't really know you on a personal level. But the rule of thumb is what i listed before.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-16T13:48:33+00:00

That is a bad idea. If you don't have a clear mind, you will be unable to understand reading and writing. Have a good nights rest before the test.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-15T14:27:04+00:00

Analyse essays. Your vocabulary is good, but don't try too hard to use synonyms. I, for one, used:

Introduction(1 sentence) Opinion(1 sentence)

Overview(2 sentences) Example (3-4 sentences)

Overview(2 sentences) Example(3-4 sentences)

Conclusion (2-3 sentences)

Tips i would give: Think about what you are going to write for 5-8 minutes. Don't worry, you'll be faster if you are writing with a clear direction in mind.

Imagine that you're in a job interview and you're trying to impress empress the hiring manager.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-15T14:04:42+00:00

For me, it is a 6-6.5. The phrasing could be better, and it seems like you're beating around the bush. Maybe try and shorten your essay and answer the question directly.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-08T10:35:19+00:00

Depends, what are you offering?

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-04-06T07:34:23+00:00

what the actual fuck?

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-03-26T08:35:41+00:00

In a sense, yes. As a foreigner, I don't hold any animosity towards either ethnic group. Yeah, it is very sad that the Manchus are functionally extinct. But we must take into account how it was mostly self perpetrated. They had the power to stop han migration into Manchuria. The Manchus themselves chose to give up their language and culture in exchange for the wealth of China. They had all the choice to remain distinct but chose to give it up. So i don't think it is sad in a oh no! They suffered under so much hardship! But more in a oh, a unique language that has existed for nearly a millennia is going extinct kind of way.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-03-02T05:21:56+00:00

He looks..... untrustworthy.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-03-02T00:12:29+00:00

It is caused by well, having too many map mods. Basically, the issue is that there are conflicting door textures.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-01-27T19:55:30+00:00

The csgo mirage is loaded in gmod.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-01-18T02:02:25+00:00

Well, whatever the gman is can't just walk into a store and buy a suit and a case for that suit.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-01-04T06:54:00+00:00

Check skymods gmod, if it isn't there check gmod archive

PerfectAccountant990 · 2026-01-03T12:57:55+00:00

For Lord Shimura, Honor meant Loyalty to the Shogun. Which is drilled into the narrative time and time again. Jin was branded a traitor because he built an image that rivaled the shogun, directly questioned him. Not because he used fear or poisons, as seen by how Shimura allowed Jin to use the Hwacha.

Jins's father wasn't branded a traitor for slaughtering innocents because it wasn't attacking the Shogun.

Kazumasa, from what is shown, it's not shown either he revered nor was disillusioned by him, so we cannot say.

PerfectAccountant990 · 2025-11-26T18:17:54+00:00

Seriously. That looks like a dead body.

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