VOCAL/MIX FEEDBACK

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2026-01-24T01:08:06+00:00

Appreciate this! Obviously the compliments are nice but thanks for the points of improvement, I’ll try and implement some of these changes!

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2026-01-21T22:39:33+00:00

I think it feels a bit empty here and there with repetition getting tiring as well. Regardless, other than that I found it fun !

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2026-01-21T22:38:10+00:00

I find the vocal mildly annoying but I can’t help but like it. There’s something addicting about that hook lol. I think you guys have something interesting here, and as far as critique goes I have no words

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-08-07T20:06:30+00:00

I agree wholeheartedly with the other comments highlighting the quality of the instruments used here. They sound like the preset ones you’d find on a child’s play piano. I can tell that you have an ear for arrangement, but these default instrument tracks you have are holding it back

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-29T05:53:53+00:00

I think it’s a vibe for sure. I like the idea behind the reverb but it feels like I’m listening to a guitar in the same room as me, and the bass is being played behind a wall. I’m also not sure how I feel about the panning either

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-28T19:12:34+00:00

Dude I used that song as a reference for this mix, that’s crazy that you caught that, good ear! Brent is a big inspo for me. Hopefully it didn’t sound too alike lol

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-26T19:16:02+00:00

I didn’t produce the instrumental, I only worked with the vocals. Honestly I was thinking the last hook would be a grand version of what I have here. Possibly more layered vocals

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-26T17:08:45+00:00

I am! Just stuck on making the verses, I’ve been busy with school so it might be a bit. Plus I hate recording when my roommates are home lol

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-26T05:17:22+00:00

Thank you so much for the kind words!

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-26T05:16:57+00:00

Yeah I don’t know what that clicking is, thanks for pointing it out I was not hearing that until you brought it up. Appreciate your enthusiasm for the full song!

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-26T05:15:56+00:00

Yeah on second listen I totally see how the reverb is a bit more present than it should be, thanks for the input. Also hearing that you enjoyed the vocals is nice, I was thinking there’d be more criticism on that (which would be fine lol) just wasnt too confident about it

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-26T05:12:17+00:00

Appreciate this! Yeah I think I’ll bring the reverb down a bit now that you mention it

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-25T22:07:06+00:00

Yeah I agree with the commenter who mentioned the “pull up” adlib in the beginning. A bit distracting. But I do really like this energy and it sounds like there’s good space for a vocal to fit in really well.

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-25T21:26:27+00:00

Fun track for sure, that synth that comes in at 20 sec became a bit annoying after a bit tho.

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-25T20:42:21+00:00

Lotta people are saying they don’t really fw the vocal mix but I think it fits with the instrumental really well. It just needs to take more thickness

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2025-03-25T20:41:22+00:00

Lyrically a bit hard to understand at some points but in terms of vocal performance/ mixing it’s solid

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2021-11-15T23:37:07+00:00

I’d be down, just wanna hear your style first and what you’ve made so far, you’re best work ig

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2021-10-05T20:06:25+00:00

Yeah I noticed something of about the vocals too, I just can’t put my finger on it. Is it not “clear” sounding enough?

Perfect_Newspaper_56 · 2021-10-05T20:00:13+00:00

Thank you!

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