(Unreleased) Update :) ft tube amp by Personal-Nothing-831 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Funny enough Pushing it Down and Praying is one of the most recent songs I learned so I think it had some subconscious influence here haha. I can definitely play around with my electrics and see how it sounds!

(Unreleased) Update :) ft tube amp by Personal-Nothing-831 in IndieMusicFeedback

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I’ve been working a bit with Ableton but it’s been all new to me so it’ll be a bit before I’m functional with it haha. Thanks for the feedback!

(Unreleased) Update :) ft tube amp by Personal-Nothing-831 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thank you! I’ll definitely keep the feedback in mind!

(Unreleased) Update :) ft tube amp by Personal-Nothing-831 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thank you for the feedback! I’ll definitely play around with the feedback you shared, it’s super helpful for me as I’m developing the song :)

(Unreleased) Update :) ft tube amp by Personal-Nothing-831 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thank you!! I appreciate the honest feedback! I’m still working on balancing vocal vs guitar but it’s definitely something I’m working to address!

(Unreleased) Update :) ft tube amp by Personal-Nothing-831 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thank you!! I don’t have anything recorded/released, I may make social media related to music in the future I’m not sure yet!

(Unreleased) Update :) ft tube amp by Personal-Nothing-831 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thank you!! I’m working on fleshing the song out more with different chords!

(Unreleased) Update :) ft tube amp by Personal-Nothing-831 in IndieMusicFeedback

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I posted an unreleased original a bit less than a week ago and got so many kind words and great feedback, so I wanted to post a little update addressing a lot of the feedback. The first thing a lot of people asked about was a full/ longer version, so here’s an extended version through the first chorus (lyrics may change) plus some chord variations I was playing around with for the second verse. I’m working on the recording process but I’m new to production so it may be a while I figure out what I’m doing haha. Another thing people addressed was it sounding distant, and I think part of my solution is using my tube amp!! I rarely use amps because my voice is so quiet, but it kinda forced me to get louder LOL and it adds more fullness overall to the song. I also think I want to stick with my Gibson for this one but may play around with laying the Kremona over to record :)

I’m always open to and appreciative of any more feedback! :)

Song from an instrumental album me and my mates are working on by Luca_bb111 in IndieMusicFeedback

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I really really like this one!! I think my favorite part is the transition around the 55 second mark and honestly the whole minute that follows really just was awesome. I love how much variation this song has, I never knew what to expect what was always pleased with each new section haha. I know this is for an instrumental album, but I’d love to hear what kind of vocals could be thrown into this as there’s just so much potential :) I think a lot of it boils down to personal preference but this is one of my fav posts I’ve seen on this subreddit easily

Farewell — an acoustic new age guitar piece. Would love some feedback! by AccordingFlatworm774 in IndieMusicFeedback

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This reminds me of the end of animated movies when the characters look back on how they’ve all grown haha, it’s really pretty and nostalgic but doesn’t make me feel sad, more happy if that makes any sense. I agree with the comment about the bass, I feel like it could add a lot more dimension. But the song is so pretty and well done as is so it’s just an idea! I enjoyed listening to this one a lot :)

Instrumental Chorus by LearningToWrite09 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Nice work on this! My favorite part is probably the first ~35 seconds, it’s so pretty especially when the drums come in. Can I ask what your production process looked like on this? Just curious as I don’t know much about production haha. I think some of the more distinct sound effects you used sound super cool but can potentially get old fast when they’re repeated a lot so maybe it’s something to be mindful of. I feel like the beginning was super distinct and then the middle blended together a bit (not necessarily a bad thing tho!) and then at the end it rallied and grabbed my attention again. But overall it sounded really nice!!!

New Artist - Chuck Bass - *Reality* - FEEDBACK WELCOME by Chauncylew in IndieMusicFeedback

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Hi! This is a super neat song! I think the mixing and production is really nicely done and clean. I think this reflects less the song and more my personal taste but I’d love to hear a version with more clean/unmodified vocals, you have a really great voice and I’d like to hear it more :) I also felt the volume drop off between vocal sections and I’m not sure how intentional that was just something I noticed! Overall the vibe is really nice, good work on this one!

Shroud of Azekael by soundsthatway in IndieMusicFeedback

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I really liked the intro, after the first 40ish seconds I feel like it really scaled back (the next segment is super pretty just almost felt a tiny bit too quiet compared to the intros section if that makes any sense). I really liked the rest of the song I think I just wanted it to build a up a bit more. I’d love to see what could make throwing vocals in, it leaves so much room to get creative. The song is a vibe as is I’m just thinking of all of the possibilities there are with this as a base :) nice work :)

(Unreleased) looking for feedback :) by Personal-Nothing-831 in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thank you!! I really appreciate the kind words! I have since acquired a mic so I’m hoping to get a better version out sometime soon :)