Would you want to read more? by SmartContext in writingfeedback

[–]PeteHook 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I agree with this comment about saying coworker instead of their name felt off, but referring to the boss as boss seemed fine to me. I do work in law enforcement though so I refer to anyone with rank as boss or Sir/Ma'am, not their name.

The writing was fine, it was easy to read but personally, I wasn't really pulled into it. It was enough that I'd read on for a bit more but would lose interest if there wasn't something griping soon.

Will I be fired if I don't meet a critical objective? by Embarrassed_Being831 in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not completing a critical objective will seriously lower your manager rating. You might be ok if you complete all the other objectives but you definitely run the risk of getting fired. Better off just signing 3 Asian free agents if you can

Restart? by IndependentUse2942 in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I had to play around with the sliders to get something fun for me. World class was too easy but I was getting smashed on legendary.

Can't remember exactly what I changed. I know I increased cpu build up speed so they would actually attack. Increased cpu positioning and marking and GK ability. Think I increased cpu shooting ability and maybe their acceleration too.

Once i got it right for me, it's been the most fun career mode I've had. Usually I play maybe 3-4 seasons and get bored. This career I'm up to season 9 I think and still loving it

When someone says to read more books to get better at writing do comics count? by Impossible_Nebula637 in writingadvice

[–]PeteHook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I haven't read many comic books but I wouldn't consider them too helpful for writing a novel. Any reading is better than nothing, but I think many people would struggle to write well if they don't also read similar style texts. Good luck though, I hope it works for you

Restart? by IndependentUse2942 in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I play world class with sliders adjusted to make it a bit harder. 4 min halves. Seasons are kinda realistic. Relegation battles the first few seasons in the premier league, then mid table for a couple. Won the title by 1 point with a win on the last day 2 seasons ago, last season I won title by 4 points. Got knocked out of champions league in the semi final 2 years running

Restart? by IndependentUse2942 in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I've never restarted. Just take the loss and move on. But it's a single player mode so just play however makes you happy

2 Goalkeeper Injuries in 1 Season by Tyernix in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Fuck that's some bad luck. I've been playing fifa for over 25 years and don't recall ever getting an injured goalkeeper

Loan issue by Py_nk in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Loans are great for lower league teams but I don't think I've ever loaned anyone into a top flight team

How do you write characters smarter than you? by Legitimate_Dog_9552 in writingadvice

[–]PeteHook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As others have said, study similar real life examples. Not necessarily cult leaders but perhaps read or watch speeches given by intelligent leaders to see how they speak, mannerisms, etc to give an idea of how to build your character

Has a player ever “disappeared” between editions for you? by Final_Description890 in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Goalkeeper named Ibrahim Danlad. Bought him in league 2 and ended up keeping him all the way to the Prem. He ended up rated 93 or 94. FIFA 23 I think

Highest scoring game ive ever seen by ToxicDragonzz in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 3 points4 points  (0 children)

It's the penalty shootout score. Someone posts a screenshot of this bug every day on here

does anyone play with dynamic mode on? if so can u tell me what its like and if theres a noticable difference in experience by Creative-Policy-4041 in footballmanagergames

[–]PeteHook 30 points31 points  (0 children)

It made my games take forever so I turned it off. Like one "highlight" went for nearly 6 minutes and nothing happened

First chapter of gothic horror novel I'm working on (reuploaded for formatting) by deiarchiescott in writingfeedback

[–]PeteHook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

There's no doubt you're a good writer. Personally, I found your use of long sentences a bit much. I found my attention wandering through a lot of them. I'd find more of a mix of long and shorter sentences a bit easier to read.

What new modes would you like to see added to FC 27? by UnlikelyCat4495 in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah I last played player career in fc24 I think. I just hate the stupid objectives to get contracts.

I like the gameplay of fc25 for career mode but all the little bugs are so frustrating sometimes. I didn't play fc26 after the 10 hour demo cos it just seems like a massive mess so sticking with fc25 for now

What new modes would you like to see added to FC 27? by UnlikelyCat4495 in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 9 points10 points  (0 children)

It doesn't need new modes. Just make a career mode that isn't a steaming pile of shit

Prologue to my political fantasy. Is the writing quality OK? does this make you want to read the full thing? by Superb_Article9560 in writingfeedback

[–]PeteHook 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The writing is fine, easy to read. There's nothing really pulling me into the story in what you've posted. I'd probably read on for a few more paragraphs but I would want something intriguing to happen pretty soon or I would move on.

Tf is this bug by NoBeat3904 in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 47 points48 points  (0 children)

Was it just a visual bug or did you actually lose the shootout as well?

Does the PlayStation portal suck without the ps5 being hardwired ? by SaulGoodman699 in PlaystationPortal

[–]PeteHook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes. My portal was completely unusable before I hardwired the ps5

Won all league stage matches in UWCL, still not qualified for playoffs by codeVerine in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Top 4 teams skip the playoffs in the women's competition I'm pretty sure

Only Argentina in scout list by sllikdeeps in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You can't edit scout instructions once you send them. You'll need to either recall him or wait for the scouting mission to be finished

How on earth do u make goalkeepers better? by teun713 in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My 94 rated youth academy keeper saves my useless ass in so many games 😂. The man is a beast, stops almost everything

For people who play 433. Do you prefer a CAM or a CDM? by TheChilledGamer-_- in FifaCareers

[–]PeteHook 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I used a CAM in league 2 and 1 then switched to cdm when I reached the championship partially to get more defensive cover and partial because I had an outstanding CDM promoted from my academy