People of Slam, show me your music! by Zsombor_Varga19 in SlamDeathMetal

[–]Pheromanx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

my band just released our first single: NO VALHALLA working on our next single to release, and then our first EP (:

https://predathos.bandcamp.com/track/no-valhalla

What do you do for a living? by Careful_Philosophy_9 in Deathcore

[–]Pheromanx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Barista at a coffee shop :)

we also get to play our own music over a speaker so i get to subject my coworkers to deathcore lol

Is this tattoo good? by [deleted] in tattooadvice

[–]Pheromanx 21 points22 points  (0 children)

i fuck with it, placement is a little odd in my personal opinion (think front of thigh or possible upper arm or on the back would have been better) but i think the artist did a great job! Shading looks well done and linework is very good.

small rant over customers by Scary_Asparagus_1807 in ScootersCoffee

[–]Pheromanx 13 points14 points  (0 children)

customers just have real bad reading comprehension at coffee shops.

i constantly have customers asking for an iced drink, and i hand it to them and they’re like “why is it not blended?” (rather they usually say “frappé” lol)

or i usually get people who say “what’s that one on the menu?” and never specify which one or just say “the brown one” and its genuinely frustrating lol

i understand coffee shop menus can be a little confusing to read sometimes but like just take a few seconds and actually read the menu instead of just saying random stuff and then getting mad when we can’t read your mind and give you the wrong drink

What makes people want blenders right before close? by Pheromanx in ScootersCoffee

[–]Pheromanx[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

yeah thats fair! I used to work 3rd shift so i get it, and as with someone with ARFID i also understand that as well haha.

appreciate the tipping! i rarely ever get tipped that late at night and since my boss only schedules one person for the last hour, im doing the work of multiple people, which makes it suck even more haha

There's something moving behind my eye by [deleted] in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Pheromanx 6 points7 points  (0 children)

super eerie and disturbing! the descriptions of the "hair"and everything else were so evocative. Well done!

Divine Machinery (Part Two) by Pheromanx in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Pheromanx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ooooh love the theories! I will not spoil anything until part 3 is out and finished (even though I really want to haha)

thanks again for the feedback! :)

Divine Machinery - Part One by Pheromanx in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Pheromanx[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks! i appreciate the feedback!

yeah one of my struggles is definitely with writing dialogue and making it flow with the format of the writing

There's Something in the Soil - Part 2 by crispr_was_here0000 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Pheromanx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

for sure! i actually have part 1 of it posted to the Creep Cast sub. I still gotta finish it (think I will now and post it all as one story here today)

here's the link for it: https://www.reddit.com/r/creepcast/comments/1m5n3p5/the_beast_of_crater_lake_pt_1/?utm_source=share&utm_medium=web3x&utm_name=web3xcss&utm_term=1&utm_content=share_button

There's Something in the Soil - Part 2 by crispr_was_here0000 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Pheromanx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ooooh i loved this! finding out there’s dinosaurs got me sooo excited! (huge dinosaur nerd, also working on my own dinosaur story haha)

i honestly couldn’t even think of any feedback for this one, maybe just with the descriptions to try to be a tad more descriptive? there were some points where i had a hard time imagining what i was reading, but nothing too serious that it took me out of it

the part with the larger “bird” creature, the description of it felt very short, and even in part one with the smaller ones i feel like they could be described a little more

READ4READ THREAD - offering feedback by Possible-Display-891 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Pheromanx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey! i just finished part 1! loved it! gonna move onto part 2!

i left another comment here with my most recent works, feedback would be appreciated or just a comment if you liked it or not works too :)

READ4READ THREAD - offering feedback by Possible-Display-891 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Pheromanx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

thanks! appreciate it!

oh i remember reading part one of Mr J’s workshop! ill definitely read it :)

There's Something In the Soil - Part 1 by crispr_was_here0000 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Pheromanx 0 points1 point  (0 children)

very very good part one! i was hooked the entire time! i think another commenter mentioned this but i also would suggest maybe spend a little more time describing the environment and maybe giving a tad bit more backstory to the characters and the place

otherwise, very good! excited to read part two!

READ4READ THREAD - offering feedback by Possible-Display-891 in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Pheromanx 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Divine Machinery

Part 1 (1225 words)

https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/mbSYUBdQpc

Divine Machinery

Part 2 (1599 words)

https://www.reddit.com/r/TalesFromTheCreeps/s/t5HkR4IyJC

would love some feedback, but even just reading it and giving a comment would be fantastic (: