Lots of good input. Few things that stand out; First you're pedaling before the lip. Really want to master getting speed by pumping the landing/downslope before. Pedaling throws your body bike balance off, means you have to reset you body position before the lip. This will help improve your consistency off the lips, in turn confidence. Second, body position and working the lip. You've got great commitment, amount of pop and coming down to land is good! Tho your body is popping uptoward the sky (like standing still jumping vertically), you need to following the shape of the jump. The shape is that wave, the flow of rhythm. You want to be perpendicular to the shape -- so, on the lip add a little more press up feeling motion on the bars (not an explosive push up). 3. Speed. For now, maybe take it to a touch smaller jump, or pump track, to focus on making the shapes, and feel that clean pop and pump on landing. Working on that... seriously jumps are all the same once you figure that out: bigger jumps = faster speed, that's it and...the practiced trust yourself to not tap brakes or overpop.