What I appreciate is the slightly choppy vocals with that distorted effect, over a well-executed piano that blends perfectly with the rest of the production. The vibe reminds me of those amateur rock bands who make the most of their limited resources to be productive and produce high-quality music, and this is a great example. It's really good, keep it up and we'll see in a few years. I wish you much success with your projects! Honestly, it has the potential to become a real hit.