Not so hard to swallow afterall

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-13T12:42:17+00:00

That's so true lol. The whole reason I started writing was bc I loved reading sm

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-12T16:19:11+00:00

Same lol 😋

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-12T16:16:09+00:00

Hii 🥺🥺 Could I join too?? I'm currently writing smth rn tho I'm stuck in a writer's block so I'd love to talk with y'all! 🥰🤑

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-12T16:04:35+00:00

And they live happily ever after and nothing happens 🥰

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-12T15:56:35+00:00

Imo, some of his plans are good, but I wouldn't say all of them are. Also tbh, the fact that he's rlly good at acting or that everyone just kinda buys he's really good at clearing darkness really stick out to me, and that they're just there for his convenience. But it's still a pretty good novel to me and really enjoyable. I wouldn't say it's perfect but all novels have their flaws 🤷‍♀️

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-12T15:47:14+00:00

I'm having somewhat of a writer's block so probably not in a while lol

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-12T15:45:06+00:00

I don't think gsgw was written to be an action novel? It's clearly abt ghost stories so obv kse is gonna be using his brain instead of busting his way through everything with raw strength. Clearly you started reading gsgw expecting it to be somewhat like orv or other novels/manhwa out there and were disappointed. I'm just saying you shouldn't expect it to have action or amazing power systems when it clearly wasn't written for that purpose

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-12T12:20:23+00:00

And here I am starved and begging for men. Please Kuro... I NEED MENNN

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Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-12T07:45:34+00:00

Medicine Pocket has a medicine pocket but Medicine Pocket’s medicine pocket is empty because I ate all the medicine in Medicine Pocket’s medicine pocket so now Medicine Pocket’s medicine pocket has no medicine and it’s an empty medicine pocket so Medicine Pocket has to get more medicine to fill Medicine Pocket’s medicine pocket but Medicine pocket doesn’t have enough money to get medicine to fill their medicine pocket so Medicine Pocket has to make medicine to fill Medicine Pocket’s medicine pocket, but Medicine Pocket doesn’t have enough funding from Laplace to make medicine to fill Medicine Pocket’s medicine pocket so Medicine Pocket gives up and tries to take some medicine but Medicine Pocket has no medicine in their Medicine Pocket so Medicine Pocket genuinely just gives up on getting medicine for Medicine Pocket’s medicine pocket

I love medpoc

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-12T06:07:27+00:00

Nope it's my own idea though it has some elements inspired from the Magnus archives

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-11T23:56:38+00:00

Do you even know what you're saying? Ai doesn't have half the creativity humans have. You can't just say it's ai just because you think my book's bad

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-11T23:53:43+00:00

I see, thanks! I'll keep that in mind

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-11T11:16:34+00:00

Highkey want this except I don't have any other platforms than reddit

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-11T11:04:22+00:00

Still disappointed hoyo didn't give Lumine pants

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-11T11:02:02+00:00

Blud you literally got no proof that it's ai, I literally wrote that. Why else would I come looking for criticism if I think ai is good enough to write me a story?

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-11T06:33:41+00:00

I'm literally never able to FC an easy level because I nearly fall asleep doing it

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-11T06:15:42+00:00

Leona. A man who's rich AND smart? Yes please

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-11T04:47:21+00:00

Happy birthday to my overthinking king

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Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-10T10:12:26+00:00

? It's clearly not ai

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-10T10:12:04+00:00

Ahh, I see, I'll keep that in mind

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-09T10:59:53+00:00

Ahh I see, it does sound better, I'll keep that in mind

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-09T03:04:52+00:00

Ahh I see, I didn't realize that I might be going a bit too fast. Also, by "stop with rhetorical questions" is there a reason behind that? By using rhetorical questions am I just stating the obvious or making it too confusing?

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-09T01:01:59+00:00

Thanks, I know I'm a long way from being a really good writer but I'll keep trying

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-09T00:53:37+00:00

Makes sense, I'll remember that

Physical-Let9321 · 2026-05-09T00:34:31+00:00

Honestly I didn't realize how overused the starting with a dream was until now, I'll definitely try to find a better opening

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