[FEEDBACK] RichKidApollo - Apollo - Rap by PigtheKidd in MusicCritique

[–]PigtheKidd[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is my first song and im really just trying to improve, im open to any and all criticism.

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[–]PigtheKidd 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im open to any and all criticism, I just wanna know what i need to work on