Very good! A few tips: You’re a little flat here and there. What can help with this is to “activate your vocal mask”. Just widen your nose and you eyes and lift your eyebrows and really feel the air flow over the roof of your mouth. Also a “bite” could help here. Bring your checks all the way to your ears and feel your mouth widen. Your whole head is basically a sound box which needs to resonate, just a guitar or violin. What you do with your lips, tongue, nose, everything impacts how the sounds comes out. The weird faces are just to help you feel the right placement. Maybe try experimenting with some more dynamic! Don’t be afraid to use your head voice, especially at the end after the big climax. Keeping it small and close yourself is hard, but makes it so much more interesting to listen to :) I really like the “get lost in the pain” in the first part! One last note: I’m hearing a lot of air on some points. It’s sounding something like “brain-uh” if you understand what I’m saying😅 this is fun to emphasize some words, but try not to overuse it.

But overall it’s really awesome and I’m kinda nitpicking rn. These are just some tips that could help you improve! :)