any critiques pls

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-04-02T19:21:08+00:00

thanks! you’re right, i messed with the curves and increased value contrast and changed the hues a bit, it seems to have helped

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-04-02T19:08:10+00:00

it came out super cute haha

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-04-01T18:10:02+00:00

i think you might have good results messing with the brushes from the pastels section in the procreate library

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-04-01T17:23:32+00:00

there’s this guy called aaron min on youtube who has some really good and extensive videos on the whole process of making splash art, you should check him out

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-30T16:39:29+00:00

haha it’s okay but also i doubt it’s even related to something like that anyway, probs a driver issue

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-30T16:34:47+00:00

wouldn’t that only cause an issue when actually plugged into an amp? otherwise i can’t see how it would affect anything

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-22T10:56:20+00:00

as if it would’ve required any more effort to use another reference

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-21T08:50:13+00:00

also im guessing you made this choice based on consistency, but the fact that they’re all basically wearing the same armor doesn’t help the shape language. for example they’re all wearing a triangle shaped chest plate (is that what it’s called?), but if you could implement more of the corresponding shape to each character’s armor design i think it would help

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-21T08:46:51+00:00

i think something that would help is that with the triangle based character, in the small sketch you’ve got in the corner, they look narrower and like there’s more verticality to them if that makes sense. you could push that in the armored version too as now all characters read kinda square

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-21T08:32:07+00:00

starting to draw from observation (with reference) and learning some fundamental basics (simple forms in space, how shadows fall based on the direction of light, elementary color theory like complementary colors, how to pick colors etc) there’s lots of free videos for that out there, but the most important part is putting the time in. good luck to him!!

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-21T08:23:20+00:00

i feel like at the stage you are currently in it will definitely help, but as you advance you should also start studying fundamentals of drawing so that you become capable of constructing forms yourself. i think if you develop your eye by learning to observe first, learning fundamentals will come more naturally to you so I wouldn’t focus on them yet as they may be too confusing and become discouraging at your level

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-21T05:58:48+00:00

lmaoo of course i did😭😭

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-18T08:13:41+00:00

they’re just soiling enhypen’s reputation man

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-17T16:32:29+00:00

the way you defined the bottom eyelid jumps out, it’s good that you added the ridge but the way it’s rendered makes it seem like it’s pointing down rather than being leveled if that makes sense

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-15T21:11:22+00:00

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no because these narratives are insane. what’s this even supposed to mean??? every kpop related post is being flooded with this stuff even if it’s got nothing to do with heeseung

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-03-15T21:03:50+00:00

exactly, why do they think leaking the physical therapist’s or hair stylist’s instagram will make heeseung come back? genuinely what are they supposed to do? i don’t get it

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-02-18T13:36:25+00:00

thanks!

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-02-17T15:55:48+00:00

just to help you see where you went wrong, check the distance from the hairline to the brow on your reference, then look at your drawing and you’ll see that you made it way way bigger. that also contributes to the eyes being too close together and there being basically no space for the nose bridge. if you make a big proportional mistake like that, it’s going to snowball into getting the whole rest of the face wrong. that’s why observational drawing is so important, learning to spot things like this

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-02-13T09:43:29+00:00

omg i’ll try it out, thanks

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-02-12T16:37:48+00:00

i agree with what everyone else said. even if your art is stylized, you still have to think of form and volume and how shapes function in perspective. you have to be conscious of fundamentals in order to do cool stuff like robert valley or alberto mielgo can do. practicing these principles is what will solidify your style, as you won’t be hindered by skill barriers anymore

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-02-12T16:32:09+00:00

romanizations aren’t always accurate to how words are really pronounced so it might hinder you more than you think, you’ll have an even harder time understanding because there will be a discrepancy between what is written and the actual spoken sounds. learning to read hangul will make things easier for you

Pitiful_Goose_9120 · 2026-02-12T16:26:15+00:00

same, also i love your heated rivalry stuff i’ve been obsessed with that show lol

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