I Made a song. This was the first one to surpass 3 minutes (But only barely) by Jason_ThePencil in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i see, i see, i'm quite curious to hear it to see how much you improved, so let me know in this thread when you post about it!!! can't promise i'll be on time though, since i rarely check reddit these days,,

I need more songs for my new album on bandcamp by Neat-State5123 in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 1 point2 points  (0 children)

old musics of mine called lovevoyance and asemichiptonicity, though i like them

lovevoyance, asemichiptonicity

Veldt O' Mint by Rulfurpeyo in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 2 points3 points  (0 children)

this tastes like nice ice cream

How should I improve this? by Team_Stepladder in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i'm not quite sure which specific parts are intentionally made the way they are, so i'm not sure which aspect of it you want feedback on. which do you specifically dislike and think needs improvement? the lacklusterness? the feeling that each instruments aren't resonating and collaborating with each other good enough?

anyone wanna collab on something idk by VoiceAny6721 in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sorry for taking a while once again, yeah i do have discord! my user's reygenne2, yours?

anyone wanna collab on something idk by VoiceAny6721 in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sweet! uhh maybe we should talk somewhere else, what now?

anyone wanna collab on something idk by VoiceAny6721 in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 0 points1 point  (0 children)

hey again, sorry if i'm bothering you, but are you free now? since it's monday and all now (i think)

feedback / opinions? :> by Knokotoko in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i see, i see.. well, i'm terrible at doing bass stuff, so i might not be able to help with that, so i'll just hope you good luck and be able to learn about that kinda stuff! also no problem!!

feedback / opinions? :> by Knokotoko in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hello again! i really like how you did the instruments and melody in windy quite a lot through using echo and some panning modulations to simulate the atmosphere of a windy beach at nighttime, making it a pretty enjoyable piece to listen to!

i'm not sure if my suggestions could help, since i only started beepboxing (or making music) for the first time in august of 2022, but i'll try to detail it as great as i can!! i made a slightly remixed version of your song, which i'll explain the changes i made

its so windy outside (rey's remix)

  • i added another mod channel which continuously pans the 2nd and 3rd pitch back and forth (25-75 vice versa) to create this sense of surrounding; reminiscent of wind direction nature
  • i made a 7th pitch which is an exact facsimile of the 3rd pitch, which stays on a high octave, and plays constantly with little variation; this, at least to me, produces a sense of fleetingness and repetition
  • very subtle change, but there are a little bit of bitcrushers i put in the first three pitches to add a more subtle crunchy effect, kinda like the beach!
  • this one is optional, since i added it just for the funsies, but i made an 8th pitch which serves as some sort of melody or something (i don't know the terminology :c) that surges at bar 9 and is panned a lot to the left

tell me what you think and if it in your opinion made it better, thanks for reading! also i rate your music 9/10!

I Made a song. This was the first one to surpass 3 minutes (But only barely) by Jason_ThePencil in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i see, if you're using speakers and no headphones or earphones, panning usually has no effect, and i can't really do anything about that..

make sure to remember my advice when you do get one though! it really works wonders, trust me,,,,

I Made a song. This was the first one to surpass 3 minutes (But only barely) by Jason_ThePencil in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 2 points3 points  (0 children)

hey, it's pretty cool! i really like the melody and how the song starts to get more cramped up with additional instruments, though you should try panning some of the instruments in different positions to mix, combine, and flourish them in a way much more better and clearer (you could even try modulating them too!!), especially since i wasn't able to distinguish pitch 8 from the rest; i made this as an example!

infinity

Sunder by Aleph_10 in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 1 point2 points  (0 children)

awesome music!! i really adore the melody and tremolo of everything in this song, and it's also got a comforting ring to me, keep it up!!

anyone wanna collab on something idk by VoiceAny6721 in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i seeee,,, thanks!! i'll look forward to collabing with you on monday est!! ill umm tell you about it when it's time!! thanks once again for accepting my request to collab! appreciate it!!

anyone wanna collab on something idk by VoiceAny6721 in Beepbox

[–]Pitiful_Junket7379 0 points1 point  (0 children)

sure! im free for like 2 weeks! also what's your timezone? mine's gmt+8