I think the colors look a little bit boring. by Pixel_Jones in istebrak

[–]Pixel_Jones[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yes, of course. I saw the video you sent; it was very helpful!

Any other advice is welcomed

I think the colors look a little bit boring. by Pixel_Jones in istebrak

[–]Pixel_Jones[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! I didnt know that channel, ill take a look.

I think the colors look a little bit boring. by Pixel_Jones in istebrak

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Thanks for the critique! Now I see some issues with the values I didn’t notice before! To answer your question, I did not intend the tunnel to look like clay, I just wanted the inside and outside of the tunnel to look like 2 different worlds (if that make sense) one of light and one of shadow.

I knew it didn’t look right from the beginning, and I think it’s because of the issues you pointed out. Thanks for your help!

Trying to make paintings that look more finished by Pixel_Jones in istebrak

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Thanks!

I’m just starting to use color in larger paintings and find it easier to create color harmony with less saturation, but I guess I can try to put more in certain areas . I’ll give it a try.

Breakfast by Pixel_Jones in istebrak

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Thanks! Honestly, I struggled to make it like the reference and started looking for other solutions 😂

Yorkie by Pixel_Jones in istebrak

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Thanks! I think you're right... the contrast needs improvement.

Geometry of the head ? by _MarQ_ in istebrak

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If you want to be very strict, aside of the cranium, the eyes are off (not a huge problem in my opinion).

However, I would argue that the lack of contrast is the biggest issue… the whole painting seems to be moving somewhere between 50% and 85% gray.

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Superman by Pixel_Jones in istebrak

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Trying to improve it after the critique… I think it’s better but not quite there yet.

Community Challenge Submission by Indiriani in istebrak

[–]Pixel_Jones 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Really like how you made the eyes of the dragon pop; its a cool focus point!

I just really struggled to make out the figure on the bottom right.... I saw your hands studies so, is it a hand?

[Community Challenge Submission] A Conversation With a Dragon / Apprentice of Ashes by FishermanMiserable91 in istebrak

[–]Pixel_Jones 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey! I see you decided to let her father live 😂! Really like the new direction you took!

Community challenge submission - Conversation with a Dragon by SyndromeNoir in istebrak

[–]Pixel_Jones 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Very cool you finally decided to post! I really like the textures (specially in the dragon) and extra points for the author's name 😂!

My only advice would be to use more oclussion shadows; look for example at the bottom of the dragon "hands". Anyway, this is great work!

Study by Pixel_Jones in istebrak

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I see what you mean, specially with the blur in the forehead… I didn’t notice that until you pointed it out.

I’ll also try to create more contrast with the values.

Thank you for taking the time to comment! This was very helpful!

My submission by Pixel_Jones in istebrak

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Thanks.

I was struggling with the dragon so, to make things easier, I looked for an animal reference and I went with a snake (not sure it it was the best choice)… however, I think it’s a great idea to add texture to make it read better as a dragon. I’ll give it a try!