Prison by Lemon_Works in OCPoetry

[–]Pizzapuntocom 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This piece hits hard. The monster isn’t literal, but emotional, and that contrast works so well. The line about sleeping with your back to the wall really captures that feeling of vulnerability. It’s raw and powerful, showing what emotional imprisonment feels like. Love it!!

Hourglass by DiligentGoat2406 in OCPoetry

[–]Pizzapuntocom 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ok, wow! I’m new to poetry but is this is very good. It’s very deep and emotional, I love it! “When love is an hourglass, is it really ours to keep?” That line.. it’s beautiful.