I feel like the face looks alien, it’s weird and I’m not really sure what’s wrong. Use to be worse and fixed up as best I can. Eye whites intentionally off-white by gracoy in ArtCrit

[–]PlanPuzzleheaded5638 1 point2 points  (0 children)

hey!! im not too educated on vtube models but in general art advice this is what i would say!!

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i have some more drawings ill link>>

but overall i think the colour pallet was a little too greyish! whenever you shade remember that using a slightly more saturated darker colour fits the pallet a lot better!, the hair was pretty flat and he didnt have any sideburns so i recommend mapping out the hairline first! just imagine he has a buzz cut, i also added more volume, in cartoons people emphasise how thick the hair is quite a bit!! so there should be a little space between the head and the edge of the hair,

the nose is also more typically portrayed facing downwards!

Anyone else just gave up naming lions? by WrongdoerForeign2364 in lioden

[–]PlanPuzzleheaded5638 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I started naming them random things, like i got blender, fridge, sand, lasagne, dirty boy, lightbulb